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for The Crux of the Problem

by Shanastay

person Brenda
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh wowt wat was good. Love the scene with the twins. lol though got a little confusing when it seemed you were going back in time. Still good, just a little confusing to what was going on, like whether it was past, present or remembering the past in the present etc. et. Do write more. I'll have to try to remember to check here when there are updates. Have a habbit of reading on ff.net first. :)
Brenda
person Lorwen
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well... I've got to hand it to you... You certainly topped chapter 1!!! :p
Can't wait to read what they are up to now!

keep up the *very* good work!

Huggles

Lorwen
person Talasi
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is delicious. Please continue. I can't get enought of that naughty Marchwarden. ;-)
person Gin
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love Haldir
person Lorwen
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
he he he, now this seems fairly familiar I saI said it before and I'll say it again, you have a way with words that renders me without words :p
You sure have captivated another reader! Keep this up, please? :p

Huggles

Lorwen
person Babmidnig s
schedule January 24, 1920 at 12:00 AM
I see you've written another good chapter. :( *pouts* Though I still want to know what the 'sandwish' was about with Janessa and the twinhe she scene with Haldir carrying Janessa away when he got her out of a tree with her cursing in different languages... now that was funny...now I have to wonder what Legolas thought of that one!! :)
Brenda

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