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for A Healing Touch

by Gore

person louise_oblique
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so so cute. just lovely
hugs
louise
person Amelie
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Elladan and Elrohir ARE in the movie. I have seen it twice already, and verified it. If you want to know where email me, if I post it here, someone else may see it and get angry at me for spoiling it.rdanrdan is also in it.
person Steph
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, where do you get this stuff!? A baby orphan dragon...adorable. And he is the perfect friend for Legolas to champion, as he is a kind of orphan too. This is the sweetest story. It is definately a part of my short list of favorite Legolas fics. I love the detail, the plot, the relationships, and the beautiful characterization of Legolas. One of my favorite scenes so far is where you mentioe wie wild pig Glorfindel killed and Legolas' powerful reaction to it. I love how he is described as a pure hearted elfling because it makes him all the more loveable. I think that is what others react to most in him, such as Elrond, the twins, and the big man himself-Glorfindel. I can't thank you enough for this fun story. Please update soon! I know you have been wonderfullmelymely with your posts, but I just want this to go on and on.
person SILVER
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER I CANNOT WAIT!
person Mawgy
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(part 1)

Hehe, I like the half/truth thing. I do it ALL the time! My parents ask me why I'm home so late, I say I missed the train or bus I was meant to catch, which is true, but the reason as to why I missed it never comes up, so it's alright. :)

Oh, he's gonna make a vase all himself? How sweet! And, I bet Elrond will end up loving it more than the expensive one. It's amazing how quickly Legolas can get himself in and out of trouble so quickly. One day he's the worst Elfling in Rivendell, then next he'll be everyone's favourite Elf again.

Now, I realise Elrond has told Leggy not to fear anyone in Rivendell, but I can't help but think that some sort of flash back as to what happened to Leggy should have come back to him when Elrond told him to remove his leggings. I just think it would be a good way to add a bit more tension to the scene, and perhaps a way to show that Leggy may not be ready to go home yet, if he isn't, that is.

Oh, poor Glorfindel. I feel so sorry for him. Stupid Elves and their peer pressure. Urgh, such a horrible thing. Can't wait to see what Leggy does with the clip. I'm sure that will make Glorf feel a lot better, though I suppose Elrond's already had a good go at that. huh?

YAY! I got the longest reply again! Thanks!
Well, don't worry, I'll always be here to make you feel better.
Yeah, I used to be picked on heaps, but then I moved 1800 kimlometres away, and went to a public school, rather than a religious one, and it hasn't happened since. But kids can defiinitely be cruel. And,, it's more than that, it's how they do it on purpse, knowing they are being mean, and not caring how they hurt people. I'd like to think grown-ups are more sympathetic than that.

Thanks for the update, I'll go read the second part now.

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(part 2)

What would we kill you for? There wasn't anything in there worth killing you for. I thought it was just one really nice, sweet chapter.

I thought it was really good how Elrond seems to know everything that goes on in his household. Poor Legolas, he thought he had been really quiet and careful not to be seen too. And I thought it was cute how Elrond was a little suspiscious of what the gift might do to him. Seriously, for a moment there I thought he wouldn't be too surprised if Legolas was giving him a baby warg! Oh, and it was so cute when Leggy asked if Elrond loved him even more now that he got another vase to replace the old. And, although it's nice Leggy has talent, I just can't help but think that it would have been just as sweet if the vase was a little lop-sided and not quite even. I mean, it's the thought that counts, so even if the quality of the gift isn't that great, just that Leggy had gone to the trouble of making this strangely-shaped vase, therondrond would have loved it all the more for the uniqeness of the gift.... Just my opinion of course, but it was still quite sweet how it worked out.

Anyway, oh, I loved how Glorfindel told Legolas he was babbling. Elrond's getting soft? Well, I suppose that just goes to show how much everyone loves our little greenleaf. Though, I suppose considering Glorfindel was somewhat a little emotionally unbalanced at the time, it's good it wasn't him that spanked Leggy. If it was him, the poor little elfling wouldn't be able to sit for a week!

Oh, and that really was a cute litttle story about Glorfindel's past. Especially how his niece and Leggy have the pleading eyes in common. Just sweet.

And how Leggy refuses to sing to anyone but Glorf is just adorable!

That last little paragraph is nice, though I don't quite fuly undertsnad what is meant by it. Though I'm sure I'll find out in later chapters.

Anyway, thanks again for another great update, can hardly wait for the next one,

Luv Mawgy
person Isisisatis
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor innocent Legolas!
And I was so feeling with Elrond. I remembered a little lady that had to be punished, and too was so distraught that it nearly broke my heart. And just like Legolas she did make amends for her mistakes.
I a I already tell you that I simply love your story? Well, if not: I love it, love it, love it! And I'm very greatful you update quite often :-)!

Thanks, Isis
person 102000
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
U made me cry.....Bwaaaaaaaaaaaa.....
Anyway awesome story!!!
More!
person Shadow Archer
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean about fanfiction.net I'm an author on there as well and I have strated to notice how they are cutting down on everything. It's starting to become like the Disney Channel, very, very, very sucky! I really do like this story and I can;t wait to see where you go with it. I usually don't any M/M love but this is very well written to the point where you don't really notice the things going on. Anyway, I'll be checking back again soon for more chapters so please update again!

Shadow Archer

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person louise_oblique
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
two lovey chapters, I thought it was very goo don don't cower
just lovely and sweet and thic rec really keeps you interested
happy christmas and best wishes for the new year:)

huggs
louise

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