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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very sexy, loved it... I've seen *a perfect Murder* yesterday and somehow I can clearly visualize Viggo doing this, *gg*.
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, hot for sure, but one thing:
Hthe the time I didn't know whose POV the story was from, and that's a big problem. You always need to clearly differentiate which character is doing what, it's just not good writing if you don't. Also, it's a bad idea to switch POV's every paragraph or two.
Hthe the time I didn't know whose POV the story was from, and that's a big problem. You always need to clearly differentiate which character is doing what, it's just not good writing if you don't. Also, it's a bad idea to switch POV's every paragraph or two.