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for The early Bird Catches the worm

by Mody

person kirameki
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I liked it. =3
person Liesl
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word, three letters : H.O.T.

person s
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uuh...interesting.
person Bekki
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I verrelyrely review, but just can't stand to see someone's hard work go without at least *one* comment. *S*

Not bad at all, actually. The POV was interesting, and the pairing is one of my favorites. There were a few punctuation errors (one of my pet peeves), but they didn't take away from the work itself. Perhaps a beta next time? No worries though. Like I said, the errors were nothing major. Good job overall.

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