rate_review Reviews

during the whole fic. i was literally dieing!!!!!! i don't know if it was really meant to be that funny................it was great!!! it was a very good idea. well done!!!!!!! * evil grin* oohhhhh the the images and thoughts..........................

Your writing style seem to have changed from the first chapter, but no complaints. Waiting for the next chapter.

well, seeing as review are what gets you to post more......PLEASE!!!! :p I amsolutely love this story, I've been reading since the beginning and can't wait for the next chapter! :D

OH sweet Jesus, Valar, and any other gods you may worship!!! You have talent and I beg for more!!!!

I think...no...I know that there are many men that walk this earth who need nay should be REQUIRED to read this!

Forepla so so great. I think this could very nearly be a handbook! LOL

At any rate...my poor hubby will have no clue that his is only a stand-in

MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH (evil laugh)

~Ali

what sexy erotic fun. ;) I like the fact that you wrote the fic from both of their points of views. Very well done, I'd like to see more. Keep up the good work.

I think this fic is a good stand alone fic or one that can be easily added on to. Melanin would be facinating to get to know. I have a lot of respect for any fic author that can write good erotic sex scenes without being vulgar or crude. I am not a prude by any means but I hate wham bam thank you maam fics that have all the finess of a badly done porno movie. You have written a fic that is romantic, erotic, playful and fun. I was kinda like Melanin in thinking that the foot as an errogenous zone was kind of..how did she put it? Icky. Your clever writing has made me change my mind about this, Legolas can lavish attention upon my feet anytime ;) Please continue with this fic you have a distinct playful writing style that is intriguing and fun to read. Keep up the excellent work and i look forward to more chapters.

Peace,
Amy

Holy Hannah! what a chapter. Naughty elf indeed ;) Who ever would have thought Legolas had a slightly kinky side. I love it. But then again variety is the spice of life. please keep chapchapters coming this is getting good. Now if I only had some chocolate........

So...I want one just like him for home! Ego & all. Please...more...soon...(I ain't too proud to beg LOL)

~Ali

omg i was just comming tock mck my reviews and i saw your story.. it is sooo good... im not even finished readingbut but still i just thought you should know i love this story... :-)