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for Dare Me Not

by ihgs123

person Woo
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story it's great, but there appears to be a chapter missing. Chapter 3. would love to be able to read it.
person THE Morgul Queen
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All in all, I have to say that you are a good writer and you have the potential to be great. I would also like to congratulate your Beta, because he/she has doneawesawesome job, however, I would advise him/her to look a little bit closer when going over your text because I noticed a few misspelled words here and there, and several tense changes - watch out for those, they can ruin a wonderful story by making it hard to understand - but I haven't noticed any grammatical errors. Congratulations!

Your level of writing is far higher than most of the FanFic authors of today - especially those on FF.net - and I look forward to seeing mof yof your work.

Yours sincerely,
THE Morgul Queen
person HHS
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is great!!!GROWL!!!

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