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person m
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. one of my absolute favorites here!
person Kirameki
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Elrohir grows more bold with each chapter. Shouldn't be long now. |^_^| Though I think I still owe Legolas a bonking. He may be cracking(frustratingly slowly), but he's still so in denial. Then again he has been for centuries so I suppose it's not too surprising. Bad habits die hard. |^_~| And I loved the dance part. It was simply beautiful. Especially how everyone, even the elves stopped to watch. Elrohir can be so scrumptious. Well, now we know that his reputation in seduction was well earned. As Legosaidsaid centuries ago when he found out about Elrohir's unrequited love (not knowing said love was himself), something to the effect of, who could possibly resist you. (I don't remember his exact words, but I assume that was the point he was making). He's learning that well.
person louise_oblique
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He's deffinetly torturing him, he he he he he he he *giggles* very good :) looking forward to the next chapter again, always begging for the next ;)

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louise
person Nina
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved their dance, and this was just so strong: "Where will you run, where will you hide?" There is no place in Middle Earth where legolas could hide from Elrohir's love.
person Kirui
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::melt into puddle:: My good god, I think I love you. In that worshipful, platonic way of course, but GODS!!! Long awaited foreplay, thou art most welcome~ :D Gorgeously written dance scene. So detailed that I think Peter Jackson would make a killing (more than what he's making now) had a scene like that existed for him to film. gyah. ::waves elrohir support banner:: He makes obstinancy look like almost a good thing.
person Inwitari
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This part was so great... This is one fanfiction that i like check for like every hour.. I love it! Great Job! Please write more soon!

person Mel
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Legs is playing the old "can't catch me, I'm hard to get" game. I still think he needs a POP POP upside the head - how can he be afraid of Elrohir after, what, 3,000 years??? Maybe Thranduil needs to have a talk with him, I'd LOVE to hear THAT discussion :-)

What about Elladan and his wife (LOVE it!) Did I hear the word BABY back a few chapters??? It'd serve him right to have a daughter, after all the "heck" he caused growing up. I know Uncle Elrohir will dote on her like he did on his foster bro & nephew.

I look forward to the new chapter every day (thanks for updating so fast & regular!!!!!), but I forsee a very, very sad story when Estel dies, then Arawen too :-(

I'm hoping for a family renunion with the twins & their spouses, Celeborn, Elrond, & Thrandiul!!
OH!Erresse! You aren't winding this story down, are you?? I don't ever want it to end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are one of the most gifted writers I've seen, both in plot and style of writing. Not only am I glued to my computer, but your writing talent is easy on my eyes (& brain) Thanks!
person jamie
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just too good!!!!! The emotional descriptions at every turn was amazing! I so LOVED this chapter. The end was too sweet, can almost imagine them cuddled together. I'm just so happy for Elrohir, he has indeed suffered long enough.

Can't wait for the aftermath in the morning. Hope Legolas doesn't rationalize it all too much again, and just follow what he feels is right.
person kirameki
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh! THat was great! GO Elrohir! He held nothing back did he. And lemme guess, Legolas felt his feelings because he bonded with him. I shudder in both apprehension and eagerness to see what his reaction will be when Elrohir tells him about that. He can't wait much longer, I mean even our adorably clueless prince is realizing something is up. ANyways, another splendid chapter, and with dessert to boot. |^_~| Elves are yummy. Especially those two.
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, Elrohir is taking Legolas' hesitance rather well. I admit, I am surprised that he is not feeling more frustrated, though I am glad he is being persistant. And the dance was incredible. I can easy picture it being passionate and even sensual, especially between those two. You describe everything so beautifully, I am more drawn into this world with every chapter I read.

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