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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, my beta did go through this...but in all fairness I may have posted the uncorrected version.
Want to make sure she isn't held responsible for my mistake.
Want to make sure she isn't held responsible for my mistake.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oopsies, I apologize...I just read on the yahoo.groups that AFFN is messing up the fics...and that you do have a beta...:D
So cancel out that first comment...
Thought I have begun reading your other fics, and am completely hooked! They are wonderful...:D
So cancel out that first comment...
Thought I have begun reading your other fics, and am completely hooked! They are wonderful...:D
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this! I hope you will continue it, because you have caught my attention.
Do you have a beta? You might consider one, you do have a few minor gramatical errors.
Other than that, I am quite intrigued by the story! I completely support those who take Tolkien's world and spinoff their own.
Do you have a beta? You might consider one, you do have a few minor gramatical errors.
Other than that, I am quite intrigued by the story! I completely support those who take Tolkien's world and spinoff their own.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a very good start.
Intricacies and good storytelling
Intricacies and good storytelling
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is amazing to me that you can write two separate stories and have them so intertwined. I love how you are creating such wonderful characters. Thanks.