rate_review Reviews

It's been awhile but I want you to know I am still thoroughly enjoying your story. I've guided some of my friends to your stories and they also find it wonderful (even though they are too lazy to write a review)! This chapter was so smooth and easy...a wrfulrful transition for what's to come. To see Amaras and Phaila in a normal home-like situation was a treat. Wouldn't it be fun to actually know peolikelike them? Your dialogue (very different) is pleasing to the ear and perfectly suited to your story. I love the Hungarian touch!!!

Wonderful, beautifully written. I don't want this to end...even though I know it will.

Please! When are you going to post a new chapter? Your writing is so good...I can hardly wait to read more.

This is so beautifully written. I love every sentence, every paragraph. You've made Amaras and Phaila so real, I feel like I know them. Can't wait for more.

Hi Kim
This is really good. I love the two of them
This is not a complaint...It is so like Romeo and Juliet.
i also like the way you tie eveything in with the elves
I like it.
Vi

I love this story. The dialogue between characters is so interesting. I can't wait to read more.

So moving. I love your style of writing. It is perfect for the story you tell. Can't wait to read more.