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by Aithilin

person Steph
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 3 - This wasn't "crap"...LOL...it was a great chapter. And now I know what it is for Legolas to have a 'fit'. I also love the warm scene between the twins and Legolas when they returned home, and I am a major fan of the interaction between Glorfindel and Legolas. Thank you for the update!
person Inwitari
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wasnt crap...it was great.. i like how you showed what one of his "fits" is like.. and im excited about reading more... good job
person Aeryn
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So adorable! Yay! Gandalf checking on Legolas! *grins* Gotta love it. So twins soon, yes? *wriggles eyebrows, holds up Twins Fan sign* Glad to see updates. :) Great writing, keep it up.

Aeryn
person louise_oblique
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS. PLEASE CONTINUE

HUGGS
LOUISE (sorry caps *blushes* late 4 lecture)
person angelbird
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story so far. can't wait to read more. please continue soon.
person Steph
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for updating this! I was looking forward t. I. I love how close Legolas seems to be with everyone. That is how I imagine it to be, as he is just too adorable for it to be otherwise. I'm glad to read that you are already working on the next part. I hope it reveals some of his archery practice. I was also curous about the 'fits' he has. Are they bouts of illness, or are they some kind of spontaneous reaction of some kind? I did catch the part where he tells Gandalf he was ill for a time during the winter, so I assumed that s ins in danger of falling sick where other elves wouldn't. Is that it? Anyway, thank you again for the lovely chapter!
person Steph
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, with lots of elves caring for pooret let legolas. Those are my favorites. And you have added a twist with this one, making it fresh and very interesting. I love the detail, and the somewhat complicated relations between the realms. I'll be anxiously watching for more of this ;)
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great can not wait the the next chapter
person Aeryn
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too cute! I very much like the idea... :) Do continue on with as much haste as you can muster. I truly cannot wait to wherwhere you take this... *prays she gets to "see" the twins lots, drools*

Aeryn
person Cait
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO! Good start. Update soon.

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