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It's good to see Legolas handle the twins. Very curious about Glory's history with three?
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Legolas is naughty and its gr.. I.. I love the details of the the beads each has and stuff... Great story.. more soon please. thank you

Awwwww!
*impish grin*
Though there wasn't a lot of talk between the three lovers before more loving. I gutherthere wasn't need for more, perhaps a case were actions truely speak louder than words.
Till next time. *smirks*
Am ^_^

Yummy, as usual. Very delicious stuff you write. I like how you had Erestor and Glorfindel nudge Legolas into place. It was so sweet. Legolas just needed to let his feelings out. Amazing how simply asking the twins to hold him can rapidly lead to delicious elf sex. Not that I'm complaining of course. ^_~
Hmm... Actually (in responce to your review to my story) I'm dabbling in a little naughty slash myself now. At the moment I'm only adding chapters to the ILSS(Interactive Legolas Slash Story) which is really fun. You should check it out. My stuff is under the name Stephie P. But I'm also thinking of my own, if I ever get around to writing it. My stuff won't be nearly as delicious as yours though...

Awww, that was sweet. I'm happy that Legolas has finally come to an understanding. I'm happy they all got to have a good romp in the proverbial sheets. I'm happy that Legolas gets to wear both colors in his hair (man, those twins are bound and determined to make it known to every elf that Legolas is theirs, aren't they?). I'm happy that Glorfindel and Erestor were able to help Legolas out, and do we get any smut with those two, btw? I'm just plain happy with everything, right now.

I hope we get to see the three of them interacting and stuff in public. Haven't seen too much of that (outside of the party), that would be kind of neat. Not trying to pressure you or anything, just throwing out a random idea.

I like how you write the dialogue, it fits how I imagine it to be.

I'm in chapter 3 so far - good story BTW - and I found one minor mistake:
The number of recorded twins in LotR/Silm is 4, not three. The other pair of twins was Elrond's es, es, Eluréd and Elurín, brothers of Elwing. When the sons of Fëanor attacked Menegroth to take the silmaril from Dior (son of Beren and Luthien, successor to the throne of Doriath after Thingol's death), Dior's sons were captured and abandoned to die. Their sister escaped with the survivors of the Kinslaying (of which the fall of Doriath was the second of three) and settled in Arvernien (the havens of Sirion) and eventually married Ëarendil and parented another of that list of twins.

Thanks for the info : 0 (gasps in dismay) My canon critic has failed me (he-he: just kidding,Lady A.)...I'll check it out, when I'm done with this installment!
Minuial

Thanks for the long chapter!!! Impressed, intrigued, and entertained, as always - and looking forward to more! :)

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awwwww
hope things turn out ok

This has been a great story so far.
I'm glad I found it and I look forward to more.
Am

Whoa!
It's good!
So chateyatey-bittersweet!
:-)
Please continue!