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i LOVED your story! a little bit of plot, emotion, love and SEX. the sex was fantastic, (and personally i think thats what makes a good fic). good work, thanx!

Ooh! Nummylicious indeed! Great story.

I keep getting this image of Dom arching a foot of the bed when Biill.y...yeah you know the part....*deep breaths*... Yeah, uh...yummy?....Very much breathy..... I loved it!
~BlackCat9~

Crap I just realized this has TBC at the end... You're going to add more??? You are a god/ess!!! By the way I like the chapter titles....I love the song from Moulin Rouge!!!!....I still love the story... (now that I have calmed down a bit and can write clearly) Very well written, I like the alternating perspectives They caught me once because I was paying attention adn I was wondering who DOm was talking to that had an American accent when Billy was dancing with Lij, but I sorted out my confusion. It wasn't your fault just my quick read making things confusing... Very nice!!!
~BlackCat9~

yes yes yes update nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

FABULOUS!! How can you not continue with this??? LoveitloveitloveitLOVEIT!! Did I mention I love it? Ok, (catches my breath) please (am asking nicely, first) please do more!!!! Thanks!

Hey girlie,
I read this before during one of our writing sessions, and you know I like it. I like the song added in, and it is my fav song from Moulin Rouge (I know it is from an older song, but i love Ewan and the narcoleptic Argentinian, so bugger off) sloppy kisses!! By the way, it is spelled, Emalee. cheers!!!!!!!!!

oh yeah, one more thing...
GET TO THE DAMN SEX YOU PROMISSED!!!!!!!!!!!
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