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I would be delighted if you updated this story. It really warmed my heart. Please mail me if you post another chapter?

This was gentle, sensuous, anmantmantic. And believable.
Very good.
Is there another chapter?
Thank you
Vi

this is a very good idea for a story... it makes perfectlnse.nse. only a minor suggestion: i feel in the beginning the development is too fast. you should take more time with this. i don´t think both characters would rush a situation like this, it just couldn´t be so easy. i mean, they hardly exchange more than a few words before they end up in bed - especially elrond i can´t picture to behave like that. it´s just a suggestion, i think your story would be even better with a bit more care to the development. it would create much more tension between the two, for example... plus, maybe you could play a bit more on the different customs between the two races - there are bound to be more, right? i mean both socially and sexually...;-)

I loved this y! y! Gilraen and Elrond-it makes perfect sense! I wish I had thought of it. LOTR is desperately short of mothers, and to read about a mother treaas aas a sexual being is certainly refreshing. I would love to read more in this same vein.

I want to read more about Elrond's other lover.Who was she?Or is it a he?

That was great!
How about a sequel with the story of the other lover?