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so they're married now, right? stupid, intrusive gran'pa can't do anything, right? Or can he? (evil music, Darth Vader theme-like)

Very Intersting!

Oh God, this just keeps getting more and more intense. I don't know who is more frustrating, Lisse or her grandfather. He is getting more and more dangerous. I was stunned to find out that Lisse's Guve Hall actually belongs to her grandfather and not her...that is until she marries. If Haldir marries Lisse her grandfather loses all. What a vile creature he is. I just simply cannot wait for more of the unfolding of this story. What a web of intrigue you weave. I love it.

Take Care,
Teri

I just wanted to review and let you know that I like your writting style. The plot is interesting and keeps me coming back for more. One question I have, though, is why are they standing on latters to get to the grapes? I've done a lot of farming and ranching in my time and I've never had to do that. Other that that, I love the story. :)

I meant ladders. Typing was never my strong point. lol

I check your story before all others for updates. You are a talented writer. The emotion, depth and rich dialogue in this story are well appreciated.

So many chapters, soooooo much fun. I am still so hooked on this story and again, I find your writing to be outstanding. I am so glad Niel and Orophin have come together. She deserves happiness too. The Valar needs to deal with that disgusting creep of a father/grandfather. I'm glad Lisse got a shot at the old buzzard and pissed him off. Poor Lisse thinks Haldir has a mistress. When he shows up, she will kick his behind. This darkness that spreads is giving me the creeps. I can't wait to find out what that is all about and how ill all affect everyone. I'm also dying to understand Haldir's mission.
After all that writing, feel free to take a bit of a rest, just not too long. :):):)
Take Care,
Teri

Wow! I don't think I have ever read a story that was so well written. It's like I can almost see the old book sitting on my desk. Have you ever considered writting professionally? Please post more as soon as you can.

Earina

Wow! I am so glad Haldir and Lisse have come together again even if it is a bit strained between them. Boy-oh-boy, this story is going for the twists and turns. I am loving the way you weave this. Congratulations on you new job and training. Sometimes real life has to come first. I happily await the next part...no pressure! :):):)
Take Care,
Teri

Cliffhanger!!! There is an excellent story. Please update soon. What does she have planned for him?

Talasi