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oh, that's so sad...he loved his father, what's he gonna do now? hopefully his father will realize that this is for the best and not make a fuss....write more soon, legolas needs some comfort

poor legolas! I need more more more more more please update soon

Just wanted to say thanks for reviewing :-)

Intresting... more please...

I still love what I read.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan

oh no! poor legolas--what will he do now? who will help him?

More please, as more is needed here.

Poor Legols, so young, so beautiful.

I still love what I read.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic.

Sivan

Man - I got so excited when I thought you had posted 2 chapters at once - and I went to "next chapter" and it was chapter 1 again. :( Such a tease, you are... hehe. Poor Legolas, I wonder how he'll figure out it was actually his father? And I hope Celeborn reaches them soon...

ooohhh, write more! i love legolas and celeborn as a couple, and he'll be so vulnerable when he leaves mirkwood--i can see it now...

I'm usually not a fan of evil-Thranduil fics, and I'm glad that you're making your tale more complex than that. It appears our king has a bit of a conscience at least, perhaps he is bespelled or under the influence of the shadow... Anyhow, I'm intrigued! And I can't actually say that I've ever read a story where the character of Celeborn had any depth, or flaws/weaknesses - I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do for the two of them (and hoping that you'll give celeborn a good bit of personality and destroy my stereotype of him), and how the situation with Galadriel plays out. :)

Umm... well it's off to a good start. But you really should put the pairings (current and future) into the summary(or at least top of the first chapter), especially when your writing about such a delicate issue as incest. You might get more readers that way. I usually skip stories that have unnamed pairings.