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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The beginning is very intriguing. The plot is very good. If one ignores the small spelling mistakes, it is an exciting story so far.
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story wi lot lot of potential. You do need a beta however. We're waiting for the next chapters.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting premise.
But you need a beta.
But you need a beta.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep going :)
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOh it's very interesting... you definatelly have to update and soon... is it a Legolas fic? or perhaps a Haldir one? I love both of them! Although Haldir is my favourite. Very promising second chapter i say... i'll be waiting for the next one...
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very interesting start. You should update soon.
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one. it is a good start. i promises to be diffrent. i hope you keep it up