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by Krit

person Linchen
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a great story.
It's a nice idea to let the vala take a vacation.
But I hope Manwe will get Lindir. I think Lindir wouldn't mind that he's a vala.
And I'm curious who Lorien found in the garden.
I hope you will write more soon.
-Linchen
person Kim
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Can't wait to read more on Lindir/Manwe!! I'll keep checking for updates.
person Haldir's Heart & Soul
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GROWL!!!
person Lada
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, after so many chapters there is the beginning of Manwe/Lindir romance! Wonderful! Please, continue. I am just so eager to read more about them!
person Anita
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now, the ground is a spot where I don't think Glorfindel has spend a lot of time *bg* Untill now! Hehe. Your chapters are a bit short but I do enjoy your story...I wonder what Lorien has is store for Erestor and Manwë for Lindir :) Keep writing!
person Sheeijan
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tricky, tricky, tricky! That Valar is one sneaky little runt. Hmm, he never said *who* the dinner and kiss would be with, I noticed. ;-)

My only complaint is that the chapter was too short, I wanted more! hehe, thanks for the update though!
person Lada
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! Lorien is incredible with his tricks and pranks:-) But I still wait for Manwe/Lindir romance. If Manwe will win the coitioition, does it mean he will get a prize and who will be a prize, may be Lindir?:-)

Please, continue.
person Sheeijan
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Update! More Lorien, too - bonus! I just had a thought, that Lorien is the ultimate Peeping Tom. I'm kind of sulking since we didn't get to see what Lorien saw in Erestor's dreams. At least share, you nosy Vala. I get the impression the dream was *good*, and I have to live vicariously, considering that last night I dreamt about Crunch n' Munch toffee-covered popcorn, and the night before it was strawberry cream cake. *sigh*

person Sheeijan
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
May not be the wisest course of action, going to sleep and leaving that so very mischevious Valar of Dreams to play. Hmm. *grin* I have the feeling that before the end of it Manwe (and Lindir) will wish they had their own rooms too, for the privacy....
person Anita
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really, such a silly story and I love it! I am waiting for chapter 5 :)

Anita

ps: I wonder if Glorfindel will 'recognise' one or both of the Valar...I mean, he did spend quite some time in a certain Valar's Hall's *g*

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