rate_review Reviews

This is really interesting story with nice humor and funny situation, but I am sorry that chapters are so short!:-) I would indeed enjoy the development of Manwe and Lindidr's romance with Lorien as a matchmaker. I bet Lindir will be in owe at first:-) And I would like to see how behavior of population of Imladris will change after they will find out that two Gods spend their vacation in this particular place, if author will bring it in the story:-)
Please, update soon and bring Manwe/Lindir romance in the story soon, I can't wait of shy Lindir will find out about his mighty admirer:-) May be Manwe will take Lindir with him back to Valar?

I can't wait to see the next installment.

After having read Troglodytic (or something), I have to say: I LOVE Lorien! He is the funniest little Valar ever. *big grin*

I had this mental image of Glorfindel challenging Manwe to a friendly little match, since he's so big. I also had this mental image of Manwe not knowing a thing about swordfighting, since he's, well, a Valar. I then had a mental image of Lorien laughing so hard he's practically convulsing. Then I had a mental image of Lorien as the FrogLord. *evil grin*

Loved it, I hope you continue this (and the other - I never said I wasn't greedy) soon!

LOL! So far this fic is great! I *so* want to see more! I just love the banter between Lórien and Manwë!

I do have one minor request though, if she ever gets mentioned at any point I would apreciate it greatly if Varda is treated well, not bashed just because you are slashing her husband with someone else. I would like to think that she has an open mind and is accepting of other relationships Manwë hand and in turn he does her the same honour).

But besides that, I can't wait to see what will happen!

I have had a rather rotten day, but this did help to lift my spirit *g* Humorous and easy to read, do continue :)

more please! your very good writer =)