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for The Fallen

by ElvenDemagogue

person Jodi
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice concept. I like this aspect of Legolas and it's good to finally see Boromir portrayed with honor. Too often, people turn him into a brute. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that detracts from the story. I'm anxious for more. I would especially be interested to know if Haldir may perchance make an appearance. Hurry and post more. This is one of the storstories I haven't given up on after a few paragraphs. It's not some dreamy-eyed female succumbing to Legolas' noble charms. This one is fresh. More!
person Rangerlady
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, ladies! :)

I am terribly sorry, I haven't been able to write a review for such a long , bu, but as you know, it took me some time to recover from my accident plus my laptop is giving me a bit of trouble, so I can't stay on the net too long, before it shuts down. However, I just wanted the both of you know, that I am still keeping up with your stories and loving all of them. I finished reading Broken Dream on your website. I wasn't too fond of that one at first, mainly because I was sceptical that the incest theme would fit into your writing scheme for your LOTR stories which I always felt had a lot to day with power and dominance combined with a scenario of being exposed to the enemy. I felt that didn't quite work with the incest part, as this is a different kind of concept. And don't get me wrong, I am not at all opposed to the incest idea (in stories only, of course!!!), I am just not sure, as I said, it really works with your kind of writing concept. However, I totally LOVED the OC-Elrond part, that was really beautiful: Interesting basis to begin with (marriage for "political" reasons) that evolves into true love and passion. After you portrayed Elrond as a mean bastard *g* a few times it was a very nice change to see him the way you portrayed him, very nice job.

Back to this very story I am reviewing: Totally loving it so far, I think chapter 3t hat have been one of the longest chapters you have ever posted, right? And Boromir won't win an Olympic medal for good behaviour and politeness, I feag* Cg* Can't wait for updates. Are you concentrating on finishing those stories now? Because with all the new ones you started (about five, I think) I lost touch at one point regarding what was happening in which story, lol!

Anyway, keep up the great work and don't worif Iif I don't review as often as I used to, I am still one of your very faithful readers. Hope you two ladies are doing well otherwise and a cha chance to enjoy the summer. We had our fair share of sunshine as well as some heavy rain over here in good old Europe, but I am glad we didn't get another eight week heat wave like the one we had last year! :)

Take care!
person marianne
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next chapter. I love Boromir and an original female character or even a taken canon one. The smuttier the better. Please, do continue!
person Sivan
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Legolas maybe dead"?

More will be much welcome.

I love what I read so far.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, just don't kill Legolas.

Sivan

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