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Oh! OhNo!
Oh, this isn't good! This is bad. very very bad! I mean, Saeldis deserved to die, and really, I probably would have dismembered him while he still lived...but oh... wow.
Intense intense chapter! I kept waiting for Glorfindel to come in and save the day, and with each new paragraph was asking, "WHERE is he? Why isn't he rescuing Legolas!" :) Loved this chapter, even for all its gore and horror. Saeldis deserved it. Every last bit!

*Grabs covers.* You...you...if he dies...you are WAY too good at suspense, girl!

....................oh my.........................

This chapter is just so good, I can't think of any words that woudn't just sound stupid. It's just, really, really, good. Please write more!!!!

This was sad, so sad for them to go through all they went through. Glad the bastard is dead though, and hope Legolas heals iin both ways.

that was wicked disturbing and gross and I LOVED IT!!!! Oh what a climactic chapter, I mean I'm not a big fan of Legolas getting raped and all that but that was just intense! Loved the dismemberment and the reactions of the "rescuers" Now comes the real question, does Legolas get a happy ending?

OMG! This story is so wonderful!! You've done a remarkable job on both grammar and spelling, as well as keeping everyone 'in character', even with consideration of Legolas' multiple personalities. I totally adore little Elanor, she's so cute! (I loved how she braided a feather into Legolas' hair and he got pissed afterwards) I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. It's wonderful!

On a quick note though, which I hope you don't take any offence to, because it certainly isn't meant that way, Elves don't use slang, so 'ok' is a word I doubt they'd use, besides the fact the word didn't yet exist.

Other then that, it's completely awesome! Please don't let Legolas die :( I love seeing Glorfindel take care of him. They're so sweet together, and Legolas/Glorfindel is actually one of my favourite pairings ^_^

Please write more soon!

~Ash

Hmmm. Think I missed a couple of chapters. Wonderful couple of chapters, they were. What an evil cliffie! I'm very angry/happy with you for it. :-P I say hurrah for overkill -- but this doesn't seem like overkill. Unless you plan to have Sirians save Legolas with their spaceship, you're safe from overkill. Looking foward to more,

Morier

Yay go Mórehua, oh wait is that wrong to want him to kill the bastard? Oh well love the chapter, although for a little while I was concerned that he was going to be violated again

O_o what a cliffhanger!! Loved the ending, ut can't wait to see what happenens next and maybe Glory can come to his rescue?