rate_review Reviews

Oh, I love this! I love this!!
Cheers!
~~Merry~~

This is so sweet.. I really like the style you've used, it works so well!

Okay, all I have to say is WOW! I was quite dubious about reading RPS for a long while, but curiosity got the better of me and I decided to read your fic on recommendation from my friend Sarah (who has also reviewed).
Anyway, getting back to the fic - that was so amazing! It's really sweet, and I quite like the whole "vulnerable Elijah" thing. And the way it's all Orlando POV adds to the whole thing - and I'm going to stop now before I ramble. All in all, a gorgeous introduction to RPS.

I love this story it's really sweet. I can't wait until both of them stop being so oblivious to how they feel for each other. Great job keep it up.

Oh ym god! I so love this story. It's rarely possible to render me speechless, but you manage it. I must admit, real person slash was a bit weird at first, but this story is great. I love how you've written it in forst person, and how the sentences fit together like Orli's thoughts. And the idea of Orlando/Elijah is yummy, even though my personal fave is Orlando/Viggo. I can't wait to read the next part. I await in anticipation.

The style works so well.. I'm really enjoying reading this.. more please!
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Wow. I love the stream of conscious-type narration you have going. "Sad jealousy," good phrase. Hurry up with part ten, eh?