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thats freaky, kool but freaky

Lydia, WOW!! This is a different kind of story but it sure does work. I liked it a lot. Am off to read more of your work.

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I think I'm going to cry. It's so sad. How very depressing. It was an interesting piece though. Not bad, just, well, sad. I like happy endings. But, you're talented, and I understand about the whole muse thing, (what a demanding bitch she can be.) So, sad, but good.

Good fic; very dark like pretty much all of your others. A few things about it though.
1. If this happened it would be much more believable with Johnny and Orlando reversed.
After all JD has led a semi dangerous life where rape could have happened to him and gone practically unnoticed.
2. I can not picture Johnny being stronger and taller than Orlando it's just to hard.
3. Come on the guy who played Edward Scissorhands a rapist?
I did how ever like a lot of the meanings in it. Like we should go with our instinct and not be afraid to be wrong.

Can't really say that I did NOT like it. Can't really say that I enjoyed it either; but I'm not a huge fan of darkfic to begin with so that could be the reason there. *S*

I liked the format. We spend so much time simply in dialogue, throwing words about. The lack of actions made it seem a bit rushed, but things can go from "good" to "ok" to "bad" to "tragic" in the blink of an eye so all in all the pace works for the plot.