rate_review Reviews

AGGGHHH! OMG the angst is killing me! Can I beat up the bitch, PLEASE!! God I could also smack Orli- but quickly drop to my knees and beg shamlessly for forgiveness. I feel so protective over Lij like Dom. *pout* That is some good writing. You're killing me and I'm enjoying it. This is very good and you better not stop until they both are together again... or include Dom in a threesome. *evil chuckle* And I don't blame Orli one bit on can't stopping himself from tackling Lij-koi. *sigh* I hope this works out and you know what you are doing.

waiting...dingding breath....turning blue....begging
lovely story.
Please write some more