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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh i just thoroughly enjoyed this! wish there were more, any chance of continuing the tale? these two make a beautiful pairing under the gifted fingers of so clever a word-smith. thanks for sharing this!
cheers,
erobey
cheers,
erobey
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear Eru, what is this world cg tog to?
You, of all people, are writing slash. And I, of all people, am reading it. And liking it.
You write a fine sex scene. If that is what you were trying to prove here, you have succeeded. But I find that my eyes are crossing and my brain is fogging when I try to figure out where and when the story line that includes this vignette diverged from the story line in your non-slash fiction. Certain things are the same; for example, Legolas is still an only child (which gives the slash plotline a certain poignancy that it would not otherwise have, since it deprives Thranduil of grandchildren). But you have written non-slash stories set far later in time than this in which it is obvious that no such relationship exists between Elrohir and Legolas.
Maybe I should just read this for the sex and stop expecting it to make sense. It is, after all, very good sex. *grins*
And oh, by the way. [rant] How dare you waste time writing smut -- even though it is good smut -- while one of our favorite Rivendell elves is deathly ill from a spider bite in the infirmary at Lasgalen! For the love of the Valar, can't you at least save his life first, before his brother has a nervous breakdown? [/rant]
You, of all people, are writing slash. And I, of all people, am reading it. And liking it.
You write a fine sex scene. If that is what you were trying to prove here, you have succeeded. But I find that my eyes are crossing and my brain is fogging when I try to figure out where and when the story line that includes this vignette diverged from the story line in your non-slash fiction. Certain things are the same; for example, Legolas is still an only child (which gives the slash plotline a certain poignancy that it would not otherwise have, since it deprives Thranduil of grandchildren). But you have written non-slash stories set far later in time than this in which it is obvious that no such relationship exists between Elrohir and Legolas.
Maybe I should just read this for the sex and stop expecting it to make sense. It is, after all, very good sex. *grins*
And oh, by the way. [rant] How dare you waste time writing smut -- even though it is good smut -- while one of our favorite Rivendell elves is deathly ill from a spider bite in the infirmary at Lasgalen! For the love of the Valar, can't you at least save his life first, before his brother has a nervous breakdown? [/rant]
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jay,
I have always loved your fics very much, but I must say I very disapointed to see that you are writing slash.
I have always loved your fics very much, but I must say I very disapointed to see that you are writing slash.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lovely, sensual pairing of two beautiful elves.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was swe sweet. And my favourite pairing as well, thanks to Eresse and her "Greenleaf and Imladris"-stories.
What a nice surprise for Elrohir, to come home after this wet, tiresome patrol and find his lover there. Their lovemaking was very well written, I have enjoyed it.
Interesting was how Elladan could sense Elrohirs feelings through their bond because Elrohir forget to shield his feelings. I think this makes sense, because they both share such a strong bond. But maybe Elladan can shield himself against this? Theoretically it could surely work in both ways.
If you would write more slash, I would be happy to read it!
What a nice surprise for Elrohir, to come home after this wet, tiresome patrol and find his lover there. Their lovemaking was very well written, I have enjoyed it.
Interesting was how Elladan could sense Elrohirs feelings through their bond because Elrohir forget to shield his feelings. I think this makes sense, because they both share such a strong bond. But maybe Elladan can shield himself against this? Theoretically it could surely work in both ways.
If you would write more slash, I would be happy to read it!