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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NessaT,
I have to compliment you on your great style! At the moment I'm reading Fanny Hill and I can see clear connections between your style and Cleland's or also Wilde's.
Sean comes across as totally convincing.
At the beginning of your scenes I sometimes asked myself for one or two sentences how the next passage would fit into the plot, but this riddle always solved itself quickly after reading on.
I would love to read more of this story.
I have to compliment you on your great style! At the moment I'm reading Fanny Hill and I can see clear connections between your style and Cleland's or also Wilde's.
Sean comes across as totally convincing.
At the beginning of your scenes I sometimes asked myself for one or two sentences how the next passage would fit into the plot, but this riddle always solved itself quickly after reading on.
I would love to read more of this story.