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Very interesting story. I liked it, though it was sad. Do I smell a sequel? I hope so, the possibilities seem endless. THANKS for a wonderful story.

Very interesting story. I liked it, though it was sad. Do I smell a sequel? I hope so, the possibilities seem endless. THANKS for a wonderful story.

I like it! This isn't the end, is it?

Ah, nice story

That was wonderful. I just love reading your stories. The description is remarkable, and I feel like I'm actually there. *Grins and blushes* I have read your other stories, and they are as wonderful and excellent as this one. I hope you continue writing.

Oh, I almost forgot. I would love to read a sequel to this story. I think there is so much more you can add to it. She can go looking for Elrond. I hope that you have inspiration to write a sequel. Once again wonderful story. :)

Great story! It begs for a sequel; Lera meeting Elrond, or at least going off to find some elves. I hope the inspiration strikes you.

I enjoyed this very much. I would also like to encourage you to persue this story line further. It begs for your attention. This is a very believable plot line you have here. The possibilities are endless.

Your choice of language is very good. I like the way the human women ractract and communicate. Your choice of words for them is very appropriate for their standing. I like the differences you brought to light between the mother and Elrond. These differences would contribute well to a future, and much longer story.

Consider this a challenge or a plea, but don't pup tup this perfectly wonderful story opportunity.

Good luck. I hope you decide to continue with this...let me know if you do.

)O( Andarta Wildhearth