rate_review Reviews

I"m so sorry, but you really need to work on your "love" scenes. They are just not right. I don't feel the emotions that should come with a good story.

Oh, so sorry....Try again.

"He placed his hands proudly on his hips, as he stood, gloriously naked, with his clothes scattered around him. He raised his eyebrows and smiled cheekily at Pippin."

That is such a pleasing mental image. I will remember that one. Overall, this is cute-sexy, which I think I prefer for Hobbits. I don't really want to imagine full-on Hobbit porn. But this was good.