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for Rider of the Mark

by ZeDrippyVessel

person Juliette
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter with them getting to know each other a bit more. I liked when Gamling figured out that what Aefre wants is respect and control of her own destiny, and knew he could give her both. But what's gone wrong with her part of the Wold? More soon please!
person Nakhti
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVING THIS STORY!!! many an unattractive snigger and snort from my direction as I read Gamlings inner thoughts- so hilarious! I was laughing my arse of at this:

***Argh! The wagging finger again! Bite it! Quickly!***

I love the banter between these two, they are SOOO made for each other! (if he can ever get her to shut up long enough to kiss her again) Theyre like a bickering married couple already, so why dont they just get on with ut?

She was growling, and it was NOT a pretty sound. She jabbed her finger in his face. "You are such a man!"

"Thank you for noticing, My Lady."

hehehe!! I cant wait for you to post the next chapter- I check every day!
person Juliette
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! They kissed (YES! A kiss, precious!) and then they figured out that they had been set up by the Terrible Twosome of Matchmaking. What are they going to do about it? And oh yeah, where are their horses? More soon please!
person ellenflower
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"seen stallions covering mares with more romantic skills"
I love that line! I think it's nice that you have a love story beginning in a very rough time in LOTR. It's as if Eomer and Eowyn need something to distract them from the coming war. Great chapter!
person Juliette
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! The matchmaking has begun in earnest, and now Theoden is about to get into the game! I really liked the scene between Eomer, Eowyn and Theoden, it made them seem like a real family, which you hardly get in other fics. I'm eager to see what the King is going to do, and what happens when Gamling catches up with Aefre. More soon please!
person kathmco
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gads, Zee...read this once at LB, second time here, and it gets better with every read...

Can't wait till he catches her (soon, I hope!)

Kath
person Felicia
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read anything you write. I got a particular chuckle when Theodon chided Eomer about not being cupid. (I was a huge fan of him as Cesear, personally). I keep looking forward to your stories. Thanks!
person eRose
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, another excellent story! Thank you - I've enjoyed your others tremendously. Have you ever thought of writing non-fanfic for publication? I think you have the talent for it.
person Juliette
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I liked Aefre's ritual for cleansing the room from the filth and poison of Grima and his Master. Now it looks like Eomer and Eowyn are going to go into matchmaking mode? Please update soon, I can't wait to see what passes for matchmaking for those two!
person Juliette
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter! I was giggling at Legolas's remarks and at the idea of Eowyn and Eomer as matchmakers. What's Gamling going to say when he gets back and finds that everybody's talking about him and Aefre, and that their behavior thus far has marked her as his? And what's Aefre going to think? Please update soon!

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