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by fishyz

person Jayn
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adorable!! ^_^
person Golden Elf
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what I liked most, a sweet and vulnerable Glorfindel or Erestor taking charge. How wonderful to see Glorfindel worry about his back, and feel that his love would not be enough for Erestor to forgive his imperfections. I cried when Glorfindel begged Erestor to stay with him.

And, WAY TO GO ERESTOR! He truly showed Toren that he was more concerned with Glorfindel's pure heart than his gorgeous rippling body. Ooops, did I say that out loud?! :P

The twins were so sweet, pointing out the fact to Fin that Erestor was unhappy and had been crying.

This was definitely one of your best.

Sex on the couch, now that is an image I don't mind having burned into my memory.

On to the next.
person andrea
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a particularly sweet story that made me both smile and cry.

I like the idea of Glorfindel not being so completely sure of himself and the fact that his death did immensely change his point of view concerning life.

still there are quite some typoes in it - maybe you can have a beta get over it again? Still, the story was so wonderfully plotted, it did not bother me the least!

andrea
person joanne
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cats and Kings, The stone and the petals, Informal, Dance with me, Indulgence, The innocence of Elves and my favorite Paper birds, read them all, love them all. Thanks Fishyz.
person Gypsy
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O That was the cutes thing I have ever read. I loved it !!! ^_^

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