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Wow! I really like this. Please continue.

I'm really enjoying this and can't wait for more!

Hey DEC! It's me Lossefalme from Fic Forum! :) Just thought I should go ahead and leave a review here as well!

First off, this story is very creepy, which is cool, because I like creepy stories! Not too scary... just... freaky ... and creepy, you know? So I'm really enjoying how you're writing this out! I also like how you put in the prologue before to show us how these guys got a hold of Orlando, because that's an important thing as well. Heh heh.

I have noticed in the prologue and chapter one several grammatical/punctuation errors... most are probably just typos, but I would recommend rereading your chapters or trying to find a beta. I'd offer to beta myself but I'm WAY too busy lately, as you probably know. :S All the mistakes should be easily caught by a beta as well... it's nothing serious. :)

But all and all, I really like the way this is going, and I really can't wait to see how Orlando is going to get out of this one! ;) Course, I'm sure he'll find his new Elf abilities will come in handy during his escape, now if only he had a bow and arrow!!! LOL. Looking forward to more of this! Keep it up!

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I'm intrigued. This sounds like it could be very interesting to read. Please keep going.

Interesting premise- you have my curiousity peaked!

O.O wow...great beginning. I can't wait to see where your wonderful skills take it!

I have to admit, I don't normally read het, but the you've got me intrigued. Did they turn Orli into an elf? Looking forward to finding out more.