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Oh my...! That was so sweet! Love it very much thank you!
A very nice story. I love the thought of a big strong man almost being a virgin... ;) very nice!

Now this one is beta'd, I see. It's a very beautiful story. I don't know how long you've been writing in general, but it seems the stories get better and better. This one is a beauty, with new depth of character. I was very touched. I think it's my new favorite from you. (Still like your long piece too, but this one is so fresh in my mind. I love the turn around from your usual portrayal of Glorfindel and Erestor. Were you surprised at how well it worked? I think I was.)

K

I like seeing Glorfindel as the vulnerable one, it's a nice change. I love the it's about time, I hate chess line and I liked the arm wrestling contest, you do a wonderful job!

And another fantastic story written by you :) I love the way you described Glorfindel in this story.
Vulnerable, but still wearing the mask everyone expects to see. Well done!
S.

Excellent story! I felt so sad for Glorfindel. It was a pleasant change to see Glorfindel as the vulnerable one, though I like it the other way too ;o). And I love this line... "About time... I hate chess." That lightened the mood perfectly. Please keep writing....