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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person animebishieluver
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, you know, the valar can be really nice sometimes... so what, was mandos right with the whole vaire holding a new life thing and now Algar has a brother? or is he really the son of Eru? or just some really weird apparition bent on the destruction of rivendell and rea;;y hasn't skipped stones in millenia? just curious. update soon, bye!
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as always :)
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okaaaaay... I suspect this mysterious, vanishing friend to be one of the Valar. But I am quite lazy and I don't want to seach for the one with a crying sister and a daydreaming brother. Anyway I am always confused about them. Bad Maelle, not knowing about the Valar! I guess that does earn me another spanking...wich I will be enjoying a lot! I found it to be quite good for toning up muscles *snorts*. Well done, my friend and send Aglar to scare those meanie kids who tease poor Gwee!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person Lena Hart
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh!!! little gwee has a friend!! yay!...and his friends is so mysterious... great now im gonna go sit in a theater and be all twitchy wondering!!! my poor boyfriend...he hates it when i read before we go somewhere cause i get distracted!!! but i cant help it i love your stories so much...and he doesnt mind all the time...hehehe anyways i cant wait till you write more on this i am very very very veyr curious as to who ot what little Gwee's new friend is!
person angelsfyre1
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*does the snoopy dance* Yea a new chapter!!! what a way to find out what your Ada did when he was younger. That would be hard finding out he died alive and in flames only to come back to life again. Wonderful chapter! Can not wait to see who exactly is the new elfling that he has made friends with!! Update soon!!!!
person sage wolf
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... creepy. This kid needs to be tied in his room until he's about 500 years old.
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are such a genius!God I've missed you! I never thought about poor Gwee hearing about Fin's death. Poor little kid; of course he is scared an confused! It's good that the twins are around to confort him.And hon, your nearing 30000 hits...I wonder what kind of celebration we can do about that: 30 000 hits, 100 chapters; it has to be huge!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person sage wolf
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, I'm a ninny... I saw you updated, clicked, and reread chapter 1 by accident... then wondered why I was so confused. DUH ME! LOL!

And there is nothing worse than catching your parents in the "act." Good lord. He'll look back on that one day, realize what he saw, and spend three hours in the shower washing his eyes out with soap. Guaranteed! LOL!
person Lena Hart
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *hugs little Gwee* its alright baby you can play with Little Las he will make you feel better *pats Gwee's hair* i love this the pot thickens!!!!
person Lena Hart
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *hugs little Gwee* its alright baby you can play with Little Las he will make you feel better *pats Gwee's hair* i love this the pot thickens!!!!

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