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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I love romance and stuff but I would REALLY like a fight so Legolas
show Boromier just how good a fighter he really is.
show Boromier just how good a fighter he really is.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I officially hate Elrond. To inslave one as noble as Legolas....
I'm not to fond of the painful bedtime habbits Aragorn has but oh well.
At least the storys pretty good.:)
I'm not to fond of the painful bedtime habbits Aragorn has but oh well.
At least the storys pretty good.:)
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~just finished ch.15~
I couldn't even read all of that! *shivers*
I hate Aragorn. He doesn't even seem to care about how
much pain he just put Legolas through! If I were Legolas,
I would hate him SO much! I hope they find a way to remove
the Mael-Gul from Legolas. If so, I would not be sad to see
Legolas leave Aragorn. He'd be so upset. It would be some
punishment for him, though not enough in for me.
Aside from that disturbing chapter the story has been very good.
I couldn't even read all of that! *shivers*
I hate Aragorn. He doesn't even seem to care about how
much pain he just put Legolas through! If I were Legolas,
I would hate him SO much! I hope they find a way to remove
the Mael-Gul from Legolas. If so, I would not be sad to see
Legolas leave Aragorn. He'd be so upset. It would be some
punishment for him, though not enough in for me.
Aside from that disturbing chapter the story has been very good.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~end of ch. 16~
*rips Aragorn to shreds and sits fuming quietly*
*rips Aragorn to shreds and sits fuming quietly*
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~end of ch. 17~
I fear for Legolas.
I fear for Legolas.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is there some particular reason Boromier is trying to get to know Legolas?
(i'll probably never get an answer but i felt i needed to voice(not literally) my thoughts.)
(i'll probably never get an answer but i felt i needed to voice(not literally) my thoughts.)
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've done a great job with this, keeping to the storyline while adding a completely new aspect. Not easy to do.
I've just got to point out one thing, just a nitpick. In the last chapter (chapter 50), you put in the line: "'Fool of a Tuck! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!'". Pippins last name is Took, not Tuck. Just be careful of that.
Anyway, Keep up the good work
I've just got to point out one thing, just a nitpick. In the last chapter (chapter 50), you put in the line: "'Fool of a Tuck! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!'". Pippins last name is Took, not Tuck. Just be careful of that.
Anyway, Keep up the good work
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In the last chapter (chapter 50), you put in the line: "'Fool of a Tuck! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!'". Pippins last name is Took, not Tuck. Just be careful of that.
Anyway, Keep up the good work.
o_O Well, thank you! I totally overlooked that, and I cannot believe I missed it, now! *blushes* Fixed it, now, and will have to go and do so at four other archives...
Thank you for noticing and mentioning, and also thank you for the praise! I really appreciate it! :) -- Aislynn
Anyway, Keep up the good work.
o_O Well, thank you! I totally overlooked that, and I cannot believe I missed it, now! *blushes* Fixed it, now, and will have to go and do so at four other archives...
Thank you for noticing and mentioning, and also thank you for the praise! I really appreciate it! :) -- Aislynn
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing some more!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope there will be more soon.