rate_review Reviews

First off let me say this was a very good plot that could use a little more. There was a few parts that I keep saying "did I miss something.. You were so into sex you did not put the story in. Sex with elves very good thing, but needed more. I think if you redid this story and put a story in it, it would be a great story. Please do not take this as a flame.. Believe me when I say I am the last person to flame. my work is no where near as good as soon, but I have read worst then yours and mine. Please keep writing you do have so good ideals.

Angelfire