rate_review Reviews

Wow this is the best first fan fiction I've probably ever read. In fact I don't think I wound have realized if you hadn't metioned it.

This story has great characteration and plot development. I love how you found a plausible way to get your character to Middle Earth and made it a choice too. I really feel for you character, she is very well written so people can connect to her.

Great job. I hope to read more of Jordan's journey soon. Good luck luv.

And I'm sorry about you lost.

Love what you got going on so far, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the gr8 work.

It's a lot more complex than I had thought it would be at first. I knew it would be interesting, but wow. You'll have to keep your day job, if only because you can't really sell this, but I do like this plot, and how things are turning out.

tightly written.

interesting hidden civilization,
wondering if it is rivendell or not, because of the waterfall....

i certainly hope you write more.
it's time for some time travel, no??

if you e-m w/ updates, please do let me know.
thanks,
J

This is a really great story so far. Update as soon as you can. I want to read more!! Reading is like drug, once you're hooked, you can't stop!