rate_review Reviews

I'm still here! Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters; this last chapter of mine was a monster! I'm really excited about this story! Alice seems to have a lot of depth and we see a little more in each chapter. I feel for her. I, too, fantasize about a non-existent man, er elf. Who wants to work 9 to 5, when they can spend their days in a castle; the object of a beautiful prince's desire? Keep up the good work! Two jobs? Good gracious!

That is a VERY interesting beginning of a story, although the style doesn't flow as smoothly as it could. Still, I would very much like to read more. Good job.

I love it! Great idea! I can't wait to read more...