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Celeborns High elven name is Teleporno not the one you have that is the name of one of the trees.

Oh man!I hope that Celeborn soon realizes that if he succeeds in another attempt,Haldir will surely follow him out of grief.

Oh my!

it would be bad if Celeborn dies! I'm glad the trees and birds are keeping an eye on him!

and Galadrial starts seeing someone else?! How rude!

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Don't let Celeborn die!Don't like dying elves(except bad,evil elves).

Oh my!Why did he do that?Celeborn still has his Guardians.He's not alone.

Personally you seem to have good idea’s and I have started to read some of your different stories, but one thing you really got to work on is the reality of your work. I mean in your stories its anything you say is true for your work, but you don’t keep the same rules applied to elves that some would seem to. Maybe you should try to get a beta reader, one that is good at plot holes and knows Tolkien’s books well. Besides that your stories, and especially this one seem quite good.

- -Edward Uwnhai Silverfang =)

Actually,as far as I know,Lindir was a member of Elrond's household.Don't know what position he had though.Anyway,please do continue.I love mpregnancies.