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by MerenwenFefalas

person Taro
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute. I enjoyed this read. (Even if He did end up with the wrong one. :)
person Emma
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Way cute! ;)
person BlackCat9
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I love you.”

“Me too, you know?”

“I know.”

LOL...You are aware that sounds like Orli said he loves himself right.... Laughs... Pretty nice fic!
~BlackCat9~
person kirameki
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Squee* I loved it. That was so unbelievably sweet, in the way that doesn't make you want to puke! XD It like, feels realistic, y'know. Anyways, it's great. =)
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read this story before, so I can't believe I didn't review it yet. But anyway...
I am a sucker for a good, angsty romance, and that's precisely what this is. Beautiful, oddly touching, and a lot happier than I thought it would end up, this tale just really gets to me. I love the premise, I love the mood, and I really, dearly love the voice you gave to Elijah. It actually feels like it could be him. A wonderful job. Rock on.
person Enya
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“No? So then, um, shit. You wanna go out or something?”

*cackles madly*

WOO! This was so cute. I mean, really angsty in parts, but overall very cute. I like how Orlando was being a tease, and then instantly became jealous. It was really sweet. You could see how t het he was the day after Lij and Dom's tryst.

Anyhoo! Great job, dude! Loved it!

~mee~
person Claire
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stupid bloody tossing site won't let me tossing bloody well sign in!
Anyhoo, big fat AWWWWWWWWWW at this :o)
Lovely and sweet.........except of course for the gratuitous use of the word "fuck" heh heh
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um, this is really sweet and the characters and relationships are very genuine and honest (if you can say that about something you have to disclaim as a bunch of lies). It's a great skill to be able to combine some pretty hot sex with ideas of love and friendship, of which you're done a brilliant job. Only time will tell if this stands out as one of my favourites.

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