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for The Initiation

by BigSmirk

person Lioncourt
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...very nice. I don't think I will ever look at arrows in quite the same way again.
person Tant
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I've never seen one centering on elven coming of age ceremonies. I felt so bad for Legolas when the other elves wouldn't let him come with them, but then they did and he was happy, so I was happy for him.
person lilam70
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! Aww... Cept the chapters are a bit short. Good story though
person Su
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was disturbing yet enjoyable. I'm not a big slash fan but this was beautifully written. I like how painless and natural everything seemed to flow.
Very good descriptions. I could visualize things well and it seemed more angelic than smutty. Great job!
person kirameki
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was cool. I don't know where you're coming up with this but it's some great stuff. |^_^|
person thrandiy
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, indeed!
person maara
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was really suprised at how beautifully written this story was. There really isn't anything else to say.
person Vermillion
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was different and intensely erotic. Very nicely written too.
person DaughteroftheMidnightMoon
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that story kicked major ass! I am so seriouslyng tng to read more of your stuff. Please hurry with more great stuff like this soon!

person Iamme
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That's intersting I never even thought about what kinds of rites elves would have for comming of age.

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