rate_review Reviews

Great!!!! Love the beginning...... now where's the rest?? Hehe

Well, not much to go on story-wise yet, but I will read to see where you go. Maybe slow things down a bit and have a few descriptors and more pacing to add to the story, maybe even some past histor we we know how the major characters are in mind-set they are (you might have planned to do this already, so I apoligize for jumping the gun, if that's the case). I will read eagerly to see where you are going, though!