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person Becky Rymer
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Luv the story. Do not change a thing and keep up the good work. This is one of my favorite stories so if you stop writing it, I'm afraid I'm going to have to hurt you.
person Starwind
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'd love to read more of this story. Anything u write i'd read.
person Joe
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more, lovey...this is really really good.
person Diana
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more updates please please
Diana
person Aly
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not one of your best chapters (24), but it serves it's purpose of getting Haldir back home. I just don't get why he's so upset with Orophin especially if he knows about the attack. I hope he doesn't stay mad long. Brothers are brothers, and he is the one that asked Orophin to stay in the first place. So do we get to see what happens to Berlain (sp?)?
person kathy stgqvk
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think Haldir own to apologyze to Orophin. Now, now, I want to see the execution of that other stupid elf. Continue it soon, please.
Kisses, kathy
person giggle
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well just thought I would check here before bed and found another chapter. Thanks for something nice before Monday morning (ick).
I really like this L. H gets to hold Berlain down while L kills him. Big grin for that one.
Poor L, I hope he gets a lot of mileage out of being all bruised up. Of course he proy doy doesn't think that way poor thing. He needs an edge, well considering H's sexual appetite maybe he has one.
H certainly is jealous isn't he? Poor O. Ha to to move all that furniture and then getting yelled at by his brother. L better cook him a nice meal to make up for it. I am amazed L can do anything like cooking considering how shielded he was. Maybe elves don't really cook just throw a lot of fruits and berries on the table. Wish I could do that.
I can now start my week happy. I have my L/H fix. giggle
person louise_oblique
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good, looking forward to the next part as always. sorry short today, due at uni in a few minutes

take care
louise
person louise_oblique
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good, looking forward to the next part as always. sorry short today, due at uni in a few minutes ake ake care
louise
person Tears
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please post more! Please I wanna see what Hal does!

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