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person becca
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for continuing this story!! I love the supportive Haldir. So, one baby? Two?
person Kim
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm sticking with it till the end so please update soon!
person Ealhswith of Skye
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ie bee been following this story for quite some time. I have to admit that yes, it has some very interesting points. I told myself that I would never do this though but now I feel I must. I will no longer be reading your story. The first thing that has turned me away, is your constant demands for reviews. I too am an author and yes, I love getting reviews. But is is not why I write. Second of all, Legolas is entirely too femine for my tastes and I have gotten to the point that I can no longer handle this. One thing I really feel I must point out though. You descriptions are lovely, and are what have caused me to stick with the story, but when you are talking about a sex scene don't bring time into it, it isn't realistic. Please, do not take this as a flame. I truely was enjoying this fic to begin with. Keep writing and I hope to read your later works.

Ealhs
person Daohtreyson
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope Legolas has a maternal male or two maternal males. I think Elladan and Elrohir would be thrilled if they found out their were twins who were maternals so they could persue them much later. I can just picture Haldir and Legolas if the twins said something to that effect. Besides with maternals you would have more stuff to write. Legolas ( being one himself) would understand how it feels to be way over protected and want to raise them not so, but still be protective. Haldir ( being paternal) wouldn't know quite how to handle the child(ren) heehee. Oh anophiophin and Rumil would have fun too. Really hoping baby is not a girl way too many girls being born in mpreg stories need more male babies.
person tink
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please let hive tve twins! that would be so so great! how about two boys, one a paternal and one a maternal? i want to see haldir deal with that! *gis* s*
thank you for another wonderful update, i squeak and run to read this every time you post a new chapter!! I love this story! :-))))
tink
person Mystic
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Sorry I haven't FB'd in a while but I did like all of the chapters. :) I can't wait for more :)
person anonymous
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay another great chapter! but i don't get the line after "scene not for children" its proli just cuz i'm weird ne wais update soon please! nd have lots of fun with your new puppy! nd i know what you mean about ppl who dunt finish writing their stories its so annoying!
person li
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
babies because I think he must very big.
person martouf
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a other good chapter.Love your story.And most of all,thank you for planning to finish this story.There are so many good stories out there just half finish.And that pisses me off.Youe story is well writen and i love it.Thanks again.
person Frances Rolfe
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for saying you're going to finish this extremely good story. It is so frustrating when folks don't do that & we're left hanging in the air, so to speak. I find myself writing my own finish to the unended ones, but it's not the same.
frances

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