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Hi, there,

Another wonderful chapter! I really love your style and I have to say I almost gave up the hope of reading a new chapter before your graduation, thank you for the treat! Hope everything goes well in school especially with you English teacher, it surprises me that someone so young can write so well. No matter what problem your teacher has with you, it shouldn't be because you are a bad writer or anything, it might very well be the very opposite.

Awesome chapter. I love when Legolas is moody at least Haldir stayed with him and didn't leave. I can't wait for more.

No slumping!! Please!!! I LOVE this story! It's one of the one's that I look for every time I hit this page. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing!!! Your writing rocks. This story is awesome and I'm really enjoying the relationship ups and downs, and Haldir's learning curve. If you need inspiration, ideas, a muse, I've left my e-mail address. I'd be happy to give more encouragement anytime you think you're losing motivation.

Well a real fight that didn't have a happy ending. Those two are growing into their relationship.
You really have a good handle on how newly wed and pregnant wives can feel. I had waited so long for a baby that I reveled in every moment but when you have so many changes to deal with in just a short time it is really rough.
I am glad that Haldir "got it". No not that, but how much he needs to put Legolas and his new family first. Playtimes are going to be few and far between as long as they have a family together.
I liked the ending. They need a serious make up time now and I hope they get it.
I know it must be hard for you trying to update while you are working so hard to get school behind you. Just know that we are waiting for you and will give you all the time you need. Real Life can really stress you out to the max. Good Luck and nice to hear from you again. giggle

Again, good as always. Thanks for the great chapter.

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louise

Yea!!! I'm so glad you updated. I've missed this story. However, please focus on your school work. I'd hate for you to get in trouble. Wonderful job on the story. I'm looking forward to more.

Hi there,
I started to read your story yesterday finifinished it today. I really like it alot. It is really nice to see a more vulnerable Legolas, you just want to cuddle him and make him feel better. I like how you write and the way you describe Haldir and all the others. Haldir is so complex, loving husband and jealous madelf. And what a temper...You're really talented, the way you describe the feelings, emotions, thoughts, inner fights and mood swings is great. You've got me addicted and I can't wait to read more. I wish you all the best!!
Love,
Mimi

I am so loving this story!! I love Legoles and Haldir together! They are my favorite pair. Please update soon!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Love this. Just a hint from a former teacher. Write the way your teachers want you to write in school. Write what makes you happy here and if you plan on going to college, take some Creative Writing courses. In those you write in your own style, but are also helped with character development, primary and secondary characters, setting scenes and painting with words. Seeing that you are already doing that, it should be a lot of fun for you. I took the courses and found that I cannot write (not enough imagination) but sure can teach it, which I did for 5 years. Enjoyed it and still have 2 students who are now successful authors who send their work to me to pre-proof or beta before sending to the publisher.

I hope that you will be able to update this at least once before the 25th of May (yes, I always read Author's Notes). Give Yancie a hug and pat for me. Don't know what breed she is but I'm glad she is your muse. By the way, in the story is Yancie a Grey Wolf or a Timber Wolf? It would help picture her coloring and markings.

Go girl, your writing is great.