Denied Rights

An: This was orginally supposed to be a two part story, however some mentioned that it would be premature to end after the last chapter, so I'm not going to write a sequel, I'll just have one long story. I’m just overwhelmed with all this college stuff right now!!! As I said before, this fic was supposed to be about the events which happened after Haldir’s rescue… however, along the way of setting up my ideas for later on, it turned into a nine chapter story.

Now, I may be an inexperienced writer, but I’m no idiot. I know that my chapters should be longer then they are. I know I should write more details about the characters and their surroundings. But, its harder then it might seem. I have great respect for writers who can just type out a chapter in a day that is of considerable length. In fact, lately I’ve been trying to review stories, and relay my feelings to those authors. Now don’t get my wrong, as one of my reviewers pointed out, sometimes shorter is better…. So yeah, I could see a couple of t cht chapters having a greater affect on the story. But in my case, I’m just unsatisfied with this fic. But I’m not going to delete it, or abandon it. I’ll finish what I started. It may be a little messy, and I may be out of mind by the end, but it’ll be done.