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By : Celesta

From ANON - JW on July 02, 2004
All I can say is, "IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME YOU UPDATED GIRL. WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?" Ok now that that's out of my system, Excellent chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how Asca deals learnign court etiquette from Galadriel. I love the fact that Galadriel is taking her under her wing and teaching Asca what she needs to know and treating Asca as if she were her own daughter. Are you going to have Celebord Gad Galadriel "adopt" her as their foster daughter like Elrond did with Aragorn? Please do not make us wait for months on end before you update again.
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From ANON - Idril on May 15, 2004
I for one will do my best to be patient and wait::grins::good things come to those who wait, and I know the next chapter will be as good as the rest. hope things are going well for you.::waves::
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From ANON - Sister Kitty on May 14, 2004
ARRRRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!

You disappointed me - I thought that there was another chapter!!!!

Write it quickly before i throw my entire computer at you - printer and all!!!!
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From ANON - Idril on April 15, 2004
::crying softly::ohhh, the love those two have for eachother, so sweet. its so heartwrenching to see them seperated.
but how are you going to continue from here? will asca have her own adventures to face? ::tilts head some, curiously::
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From ANON - yue on April 10, 2004
hell yeah!! this is a great chapter. almost moved me into tears. ohhh. its so sweet. a lock of legola's hair.....sounds priceless..... wonder how much its worth on ebay?! ohhh i hear the chaching'ing of y. ly. lol. just kidding. yeah this was a great chapter and deffinitely worth the wait. since lagolas is out of the pict now will u continue with what everyday life's like for our heroen or will u fast forward? ohh the suspence is killin me. update soon. im sure a lot of other ppl are way into the story too.
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From ANON - jw on April 09, 2004
[i]Ascadholiel??? Pregnant??? Where would you get that idea? *looks away innocently* I have no idea what you�re talking about�. *ahem* *giggles* Anyway� Haldir� yeah� he�s an ass alright. I think I�m going to have him be one for just a bit longer.[/i] Ahhh, come on Celesta 9gives puppy dog look) throw me a bone here, pleeeeease. And you darn well where i got that idea from. It was the cryptic commetn about the dress Galadriel gave Asca in Ch. 14 the lines went, and I quote;

[i]"Galadriel smiled, and then motioned to the handmaiden, who stepped forward, along with her lady. �I have a gift for you Ascadholiel.�

Ascadholiel started a little in surprise. �Lady, you need not gift me with anything. You have already graciously done so much.�

Galadriel raised her hand. �No. This I think is a necessary gift.� Then she reached over and pulled a flowing dress of shining cream-colored material out of the box that the handmaiden held.

Ascadholiel gasped at the sight and rose from the bed, the sheet draped around her, having been pulled up when the knock came to the door. �Gods! It�s beautiful! I� itoo foo fine. I can�t take this.� She touched the material a little longingly as she looked up at the tall Lady of the Golden Woods.

Galadriel smiled and held the dress up to Ascadholiel�s body. �But you can. I had it made specially for you. It will grow with you.�

Ascadholiel�s eyebrows drew together a little in confusion at that statement. �Grow with me? But I�m through growing��

Galadriel smiled mysteriously. �No on is ever truly finished growing, pen-neth (young one). Especially a woman. Now please, take the gift. I think it would look lovely on you.�[/i]

Are you following the book or the movie? Cause if it's the movie then I have a feelign that Asca's going to sneak off when Haldir and the other elves go to Helm's Deep. Anyway good chapter and update soon.
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From ANON - loveroflegolas on April 09, 2004
Dear valar! I'm crying... cool! update soon
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From ANON - FreddieLUV on April 09, 2004
Great Fic
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From ANON - jw on April 07, 2004
Very nice chapters, you capturesd the angst and the love very well. Are you goign to have them find out about Asca's pregnancy before they leave, giving Legolas something else to live for even more? Are you going to have HAldir top acting like an ass towards her? And for God's sake please update soon. And thanks for your comment about me being one of thopleople your continuing this story for.
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From ANON - loveroflegolas on April 06, 2004
I absolutley love this story, update soon
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From ANON - squeaks on April 03, 2004
chapter 18 had quite an impact on me, thele nle nature of the fact that asca was sad cause legolas was going to have to leave her behind. reminded me about when i had to leave my closest and best friend because my family was moving. but the thing that hurt me the most was that i never got to say good-bye. however, this chapter and the song made me think that maybe it was best that i didn't get to say good-bye because true friendship never ends and for that fact there are no good-byes just good memories.(this was a poem that was sent to me that i think is sad but wonderful)
I wish you enough:
I wish you enough sun to keep your attitude bright.
I wish you enough rain to appreciate the sun more.
I wish you enough happiness to keep your spirit alive.
I wish you enough pain so that the smallest joys in life appear much bigger.
I wish you enough gain to satisfy your wanting.
I wish you enough loss to appreciate all that you possess.
I wish you enough 'Hellos' to get you through to the final 'Good-bye'.

this was anoter lovely chapter you did Celesta Hellewise Harman. don't ever stop writting and showing off that creative mind of yours.

>squeaks
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From ANON - Crystalnia on March 29, 2004
This story has had me rolling with laughter, crying my eyes out-especially in this last chapter- and smiling so broadly that I had thought my face would get stuck like that forever...oh the horror, I could just see people staring and pointing, little kids going 'Look Mommie, that girl's face is stuck, haha, what a freak' alright so maybe not quite so crual. I do have a few suggestions though, you do what I find myself doing as I write, and that is using one word spelling once and then a different latter, for example you wrote affect then effect, but thats nothing-not to brag but half the time I spell does as dose, yep like a dose of meds, instead of he does...its the burnettness (hehe I am actually blonde, not that that is relivent) sorry babbling and unfortinet habbit. Other then that however your grammer is good, your story constion ion wonderful, and your feelings pure. Your the modern Jane Austin...well except for the fact ther cer characters would all be dead by now, and yours a quite obviously not. Anyway, I am so happy that you are not discouraged fromtingting this wonderful story even though you have recieved flames. It takes a strong person to take criticism into stride, and I am glad to read your story. It has touched my life as well as some of your other readers lifes-as you said yourself!- For one thing it made me more aware that not everything is flowers and pickles~sorry I love pickles and cheese so to translate that to you that means honky dory~ It also made me feel emotions that I have had bottled up for so long. Its goodcry cry every now and then and you have allowed me to do this and to laugh with great joy. Your character is in no way a Mary Sue...or if it is I wouldn't notice becuase I happen to like Legolas Mary Sue stories, after all doesn't the perfect elf deserve the perfect woman? I love nature to, and I am glad also that you have expressed yourself through your character, that is very important I believe, though I am no expert. I really enjoy this story, so much in fact that I am going to make it my homepage, YAY the first thing I see when I get on the internet. I can not wait to see what happends ........Oh wow this is a giant run-on paragraph. *hands you buckets of Cheese, Pickles, and a season passport to my future country-for I shall buy a country- called 'Pickles' and gives you a giant hug* Well I shall review again when you update if I get the chance! Yay!
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From ANON - AzureDragoness on March 26, 2004
Die, carpal tunnel! Aww, even if there WAS angst, twas a sweet chapter. I obviously look foward to the next installment. Better be quick about it ;)
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From ANON - Idril on March 26, 2004
Hey, amazing, few months ago I read the first two chapters of this fic and I was like, 'Damn, this is good!', kept coming back for a long while waiting for the fic to be continued, then I end up loosing access to the internet for a while and whadayaknow, 18 chapters! Keep um coming! This fic is amazing and amusing too I love it ! ^.^ Especially with her quick wit.::chuckles happily::putting Boromir in his place first thing, and then punching Haldir? Whoo! And her past, talk about dark and deep...so beautiful the way you've done it I can't wait to read more ^.^....>.>......amusing question though, Galadriel had said 'welcome home' to her, what did she mean by that, I mean, is Asca an Elf herself or am I reading too much into that? ::chuckle::wouldn't be the first time I've done that... anyway keep up work on the ficcy PLEEEEEEEASE, I really wanna know what happens
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From ANON - sister kitty on March 26, 2004
Thank you for my screen back. It was worth it.

Now I have to explain why I almost started crying - at work - at my desk - when I am supposed to be working!!!!!!

Please keep up the feeling stuff - you cannot experience happiness properly if you have not experienced some pain.

More, please
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