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Reviews for Thawing the Ice

By : Brenna
  • From ANON - COWBOY B on July 03, 2005
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh what happened what happened ooo what happened!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - HHS on July 03, 2005
    WWWWWOOOOOOOWWWWWWEEEEEE!!!
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  • From ANON - takky on April 24, 2005
    Boy, Glorfindel sure is FLEXIBLE!! Very nice!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2005
    the whole story has been great - please don't stop now and hurry up and add more chapters
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  • From ANON - Kalima on March 31, 2005
    Ah, now you torture ME. I have been reading your story tonight, and I admit, I did not think I would finish it. I like your writing, so please don't get me wrong when I continue by saying I find the need for a copyedit frustrating. I was pulled into the story in spite of the "Elder" for "Eldar," and many times (maybe most) you mix up "to" and "too," and also "then" and "than." Sometimes the distraction of these and the odd misspelling are detracting from your story. For me, rather constantly, because I AM a copyeditor. But, I read on, growing more and more addicted to your story, and puzzling over how well you drew me in when I kept thinking I would read no more.

    I found Glorfindel irritating at first, and disliked him. I didn't review then because I don't like to say anything unkind. Now I am totally drawn in. I almost feel you wrote to this point just to torment me! I'm up far later than I should be (I have a project to finish tomorrow, and came up here just to give my old cat a chance to figure out she should come back inside. She is teasing me also.)

    Your Erestor is your best character. I like how he is strong and confused, leery but wanting to be loved, gentle and yet tough. I am worried about Celebrian -- she is coming off as the "bad guy," when you think she'd have been grateful about her sons being saved. It was odd she never thanked Erestor, and at that point I began to feel she was a little unrealistic.

    Elrond is a little flat. You give him exactly the same line ("I think they'd be good for each other") a couple of times, making him appear a bit stupid. I'd like to see him fleshed out a bit more since he appears often. I'm a little confused about how he knows Erestor and Glorfindel both well, and they have both been in his emply, but don't seem to know each other at all well at the beginning of the story.

    I almost feel you are the Glorfindel to my Erestor! You so leave me at a cliffhanger! Never have I felt so teased by a story. Now I will say probably what most fans say: please write more and SOON.

    Please remember: in spite of my (I hope) gentle criticism, I am truly drawn into your story, find the unfoling love between your characters charming (though I'd like to know more about when Glorfindel had a change of heart from wanting Erestor as a conquest to loving him--I was afraid for awhile that after taking Erestor, he was going to say, Ha! Gotcha! Had ya once and don't need you any more!"). Your love scene here is totally hot, and leaving us in the middle is mean!!! (Though I also feel I deserve it for not reviewing as I read.)


    K
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  • From ANON - BluesLoven on March 30, 2005
    Sorry I haven't been here in awhile, but Celebrian is a bitch ain't she?! ANYWAYS, ERESTOR IS VOCAL, ERESTOR IS VOCAL, ERESTOR IS VOCAL! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY! THANKIES! *Huggies and wuvs you!* UPDATE SOON PLZ!^^
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  • From ANON - HHS on March 25, 2005
    And it was getting good too!
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  • From ANON - RoseGarden on March 14, 2005
    First time reader here, very good story, oh how I do love my captain and advisor together. What's going on with Celebrain. We need to get rid of that bitch...would love to seee Elrond paired with someone else. Ha Ha. Keep it coming
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  • From ANON - HHS on March 12, 2005
    It's a total mystery to me as to why Celebrian is acting that way.Why indeed?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2005
    forget the sequel and speed this one along - am thoroughly enjoying it but the slow pace is maddening
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  • From ANON - HHS on February 18, 2005
    Maybe Celebrian feels being neglected by Elrond.That was bad timing of her though.Do I see green?
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  • From ANON - Naka Natural Goddess on February 03, 2005
    BluesLove here with my new name,MY ASS IS BACK! Lol,WHY DID YOU INTURRUPT THEM?! We were SOOOOOOOOOO close to Vocal Erestor! Also if Kraven puts his ass ANYWHERE near Our Erestor were going to have to hunt you down! Update soon! Also:"I finished early so I could spend more time with you, my raven," Glorfindel said.
    I can just SEE him leaning himself on Erestor's desk,Elbow,head in hand sideways,and grinning like a fool at him! Celebrian's kinda being a bitch or is that just me?!
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  • From ANON - charlie on January 30, 2005
    Please, please please update this soon.... its so good, i really need to know what happens!
    this is so very good, keep it up
    charlie
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  • From ANON - HHS on January 26, 2005
    Damn it!That was very bad timing of her!And it was getting good!!!
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  • From ANON - orleans on January 04, 2005
    I´ve just started reading your story; it´s really great. I must admit that Erestor and Glorfindel have´t been my favorites before; but now they are.
    Keep writing!! It´s wonderful!!!!
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