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By : narcolinde
  • From ANON - Kryspen on August 23, 2004
    Lovely and wonderful as always! I adore your writing! I must say that as much as I rejoice the fact that Erestor is introducing Legolas to the deeper, more caring and loving aspects of physical love, Erestor already has two bonded mates. I'm still holding out for Glorfindel ^_^ if they ever meet face to face....
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on August 20, 2004
    Because when I get this feeling, I want, sexual healing. LOL, glad to see Legolas enjoying himself. I was excited when I started reading chapter 73, thinking that 74 would have the obligatory sex promised in 73, only to find you're making me wait until chapter 75. To echo Legolas' comment to Erestor, "You cheated!" Ah well, I guess that's just that much more time for Legolas to enjoy himself.
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on August 19, 2004
    I have been following your magnificent epic since I first came across it at Galadhrim and to say I am n ofn of your storytelling style would be an understatement!! There is so much that has left its indelible print in my thoughts, that I could not possibly name all, though perhaps the one thing above all for me is your concept of Tawar and of the incredible bond it shares with Legolas...Thank you for gracing us with such an extraordinary tale!
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  • From sivan325 on August 19, 2004
    So... until then, Erestor will keep him safe, and they will be lovers?

    What about Elrond?

    The chapter was full on joy, that showed between them, I believe that Legolas loves his company.

    And yet, I need more.

    I still love what I read, thank you!

    Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - Jaylen on August 18, 2004
    Erobey,

    I love your story!! I have been reading it from the very start and it just gets better and better. Some of the scenes are very graphic, but they serve to make us understand why Legolas behaves the way he does. The emotions in this are running very high!! You do a wonderful job making us visualize the characters and settings. I have been brought to tears on more than one occasion reading this story. The depth of the characters is fabulous! I hope Legolas ends up with Erestor, but if not I am sure he will be much more well adjusted sel self-confident for having known him. It makes me feel so good watching Legolas learn to love himself, not something that will come easy for him. I look forward to the heartache that Thranduil will feel (hopefully) when he realizes the wonderful son he threw away. Will he ever get him back? Can the gap be bridged? The king is very proud and arrogant, can he admit his mistakes? I eagerly look forward to the rest of your story. It is always the highlight of my evening to find your story updated.
    Thank You so much for sharing your stories with us.
    Jaylen
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  • From ANON - kirameki on August 18, 2004
    Oh, that was a delicious chapter! I was so happy to see you updated. This is my favorite story at the moment. XD Nice touch with the flower and musing on elven "glows". Erestor is so naughty. But I like how he treats Legolas. It is so sad that he's never had anyone treat him like that before. And being so overwhelmingly happy to get even a small portion of the advisor's heart. So sad, bitterweet. *huggles Legolas*. Heh heh. Seriously though, wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the trial resuming. XD
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  • From ANON - Sivan on August 11, 2004
    O.k. to be not confused here: Did Legolas feels somet for for Erestor, or he wants to punish Elrond, and that's why he made love to him?

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - kirameki on August 10, 2004
    I come back from vacation to two brand new chapters! I'm overjoyed to say the least! Erestor is a sweetie. heh heh. I can't believe they did that on the path in plain sight. It even had me blushing! I can't wait to learn more. They will have to bring to light the fact that Malthen tried to runy bey before the trial, won't they? I mean it's definitely suspicsious. Anyways, I'm still on the edge of my seat. I love the healer. She's great. Whenever I think of her I picture my mom for some reason.... >_> Anyways. It's good to be back. ~Stephie P.
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  • From ANON - crystal on August 04, 2004
    Ah, the woes of legolas.. *sigh* Its always good to see another chapter, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Ash on July 19, 2004
    Nooo!!! Poor Legolas still blames himself! Another awesome chapter, and I loved the part where Legolas protected Fearfaron from Thranduil, and WOW, Erestor kicked some major ass too. YAY!!!
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on July 18, 2004
    In your other story, um, Legolas' Seat, if my memory stands, you mentioned you were preparing for a L/G pairing. Is this the form of sexual healing we'll see? Indeed, Thranduil would not be very happy to have Galadriel preside over Elrond's trial, but perhaps I misunderstood: I thought they were going to neutral ground, i.e. ? I'll have to go back to reread that part. SO much in this story, it's hard to keep up! Btw, you come up with the best curses. Sauron's shite. I laughed until, well, until I stopped. (Metaphors have never been my strong point.) Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on July 18, 2004
    AAAAAH!!! What is Legolas DOING?!! He's making it sound like he DELIBERATELY withheld his fire, and allowed the slaughter of warriors - far more than just the three. AAAAAH!!!

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  • From sivan325 on July 18, 2004
    More please...

    You know that more is needed here, right? :-)

    I still love what I read, thank you.

    Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic, you do it very tensing, that I'm dying to know what will happen next.

    Sivan
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  • From kirameki on July 18, 2004
    Once again you leave me hungering for more! XD Hope you don't make us wait too long. Leaving us hanging like that! =( Anyways, you're handling it beautifully. Poor Legolas though, now those people have found out about him and Malthen. The jerk tried to run. And he tried to convince us before that he cared for Legolas? *snort* Yeah, right. He really knows how to show it. I loved it when Erestor jumped him! That was so great! XD As for Legolas taking on the responcibility of Erebor... *sighs* He's too noble for his own good. I think the others made very good points. Legolas should really take note of them be cas casting them aside so quickly. Now, will Malthen recover enough to make a testimony? I hope that his relationship with Legolas won't be brought forth, but knowing Thranduil to be the spiteful ruler he is it wouldn't completely surprise me if it did happen. And there really wasn't Goblins upon the ridge? Tha new news. Anyways, I hope the next half comes soon. I'll beg if I have to. =D Pretty pretty please with elves on top! =)
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  • From ANON - kirameki on July 17, 2004
    Ugh, I think I forgot to review! #O_O# So sorry. Anyways I loved the latest chapter. But just a bit confused.... So, that Didn't happen and was really just the mirror's vision? Or was that happening at the same time? Eh heh. Just to make sure I'm following correctly. XD Oh and I loved Rumil! He was such a sweety! *glomps him* Can't wait for the keepsake chapter. XD
    ~Stephie P.~
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