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By : narcolinde
  • From ANON - Sivan on July 15, 2004
    I love as Rumil helped him, and care for him.

    Nice update.

    I still love what I read, thank you!

    Keep up the perfect work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - crystal on July 13, 2004
    Wah, every chapter leaves me wanting more. #__# I take it that elrond and legolas really aren't going to end up together then, i wonder what pairing you have in mind in the end? @_@ Not that i don't enjoy your ficcie regardless of pairing, but its torturing me, not knowing.. #_#; Is this series going to end in the pairing you have written for yotherther LOTR fics? @_@ Email me if you don't want to declare it, give me a hint~! @_______@
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on July 13, 2004
    I was utterly thrown at the begining of this chapter, but of course at the end it all made sense. I hope that if you choose to make this scene truly happen that Legolas may finally find some comfort without artifice in another elf. Sexual comfort, I mean, not just comfort. (When I get that feeling, I want SEXUAL HEALING) Sorry, I'm a little giddy now that Aff.net is no longer on the fritz and all the wonderful authors have updated. Wonderful chapter, though. Additionally, I am excited for the final showdown. Will the Lady of the Woods be presiding o'er the trial?
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  • From ANON - Calenharn Elflover on July 10, 2004
    So, Lindalcon has fled (or will flee?) to Lorien? That is hardly going to make Meril feel any warmer towards Legolas! In fact, I think there is a risk he will be blamed for foul play, once he returns to Mirkwood. (If and when this all plays out.)

    And there is some grave danger if Legolas come to Lorien too soon? What (other than the hatred of the refugee guards)?


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  • From ANON - Waters Reflection on July 10, 2004
    Thank you for updating. I love the fact that you are so dependable and that i know you wiinisinish this story unlike some authors who just abandoned their stories and their readers. This is really stupid, superfluous, and innane but i like the way you describe Legolas's apperance because that physically marks me as being unique and special and its the physical mansifestation of his bond w/ Tawar. Plus the fact that his physical apperance shows the beauty and intergrity of soul is very satisfying. Im so glad you are going to make Thranduil suffer, that he gets exactly what he deserves. Arwen's personality fits the waviewview her. Im glad u did not make her too sweet and generous because that be too unrealistic. I think that she would act a little like a spoiled child because she is the eveningstar and daddy's little girl etc. Right now, I really don't like Arwen but that might change as the story progresses. Your such an awesome writer, im so jealous of your writing skills. But anyways please update soon.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on July 10, 2004
    As always this was wonderful :) Really hope this site stays up as i love reading you fanfic. Take care honey

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - Waters Reflection on July 09, 2004
    I have been following your story for such a long time and the story just keeps on getting better and better with even more twists. I don't believe that Elrond deserves Legolas and Legolas should get someone who appericates him fully. Your story has made me hate Thranduil so much. I just want Thranduil to realize his mistake in treating Legolas the way he does and to realize that he is Legolas's father. But since Legolas already has a foster father, it should make make Thranduil regret all the more for his horrible actions. I just really want Thranduil to suffer a lot. I just really hate Exc Excuse my ranting about Thranduil, I just couldn't stop. Im eagerly waiting for your next update, where do u first post your updates at Fanfiction, adultfanfiction or at your website?
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on July 05, 2004
    Oh boy. I can't wait to find out the twins and Arwen's reactions to what vile deeds Elrond has done! I must admit I like the way you write Arwen, mostly because I don't like her character in the movies (since she wasn't that important in the books.) She seems rather stubborn and vindictive. Can't wait for the next chapter, though I suppose I've no choice!
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  • From ANON - Ash on July 05, 2004
    *snickers* you're quite welcome, I'm happy you liked it. Again, another awesome chapter. I'm so glad the twins aren't making accusations on poor Legolas' part. That's good. Write more soon!
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  • From kirameki on July 04, 2004
    Uh oh. Dun-dun-duuun. =) I love how you portray the twins, especially Elrohir. He's such a sweety. So concerned about Legolas. What will he do when he finds out what their father did to him? Oh I shudder at the thought of it. He'll probably go off the handle. Will they be there at the mirror when Galadriel consults it and actually see the act for themselves? Will they meet sometime (hopefully not to far in the future)? I think the twins and Legolas would get along well and could beome great friends. Well, if they can get over the rift caused by their father's actions. I don't really like your Arwen very much. I can't wait to see her reaction to their father's crimes. That should be brilliant. *smiles wickedly* And yes, please do think of another trinket. Or have not all of them be lost. I just thought you handled those scenes so well. One of my favorite chapters was the one where Elrond is playing with the arrowhead. Anyways, hope to see more of the twins. I wonder if Thran will consent to the meeting being held in Lorien. Will Legolas meet Celeborn when he visits with the delegation? *is ripe with questions that need answering* More please. =9

    ~Stephie P.~
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  • From ANON - crystal on July 03, 2004
    Yay! Right on schedule, another chapter! I do hope you get the next one out soon! But regarding elrond and whether legolas can forgive him, in that case.. is the fic going to stop being elrond/legolas somewhere? Legolas will hurt himself trying to forgive him you say so love between them is not going to last? I do hope that the fic will continue being elrond/legolas, but i see a lot more grief for legolas in the future because of it too.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on July 03, 2004
    faic, ic, missed this fic

    huggs
    louise
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  • From ANON - ladyantari on July 03, 2004
    Great chapter. I like that the twins are trying to be compassionate towards Legolas. How far into the story are you? Have we passed the midpoint yet?


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  • From ANON - Ash on July 01, 2004
    Oh my God, Glorfindel actually popped Elrond in the face! Wow, so much for Elven perfection, now he's got a tooth missing... Do Elves have more than two sets of teeth? hmm. I loved that last chapter so much. So now what? If Elrond goes to Mirkwood, will Legolas ever forgive him? You aren't going to tell me, are you? Ah well. Write more soon, please.
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  • From kirameki on June 29, 2004
    Ahhh! I so adore this story. I can't believe Elrond had to get rid of his trinkets. *pout* Was it really all of them, or did he conceal one in his pocket? I really liked the trinkets. Meanie GLorfindel. Anyways, I can't believe how affronted Elrond is about all of this. I mean, what did he honestly expect after sending that letter. But then again, the problem was, he wasn't thinking. Jealousy can do funny things to people. Oooh, so Galadriel's is going to come into play now. How nice. ^_^ Can't wait.
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