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From ANON - Mawgy on February 01, 2004
*speechless*

So, Thranduil finally got the cloth! I just LOVED his reaction to it! Oh, and Fearfaron! How cool is he? (well, you should know, you made him up). You know, I'd love to read the rest of Elrond's letter because the parts we were able to read were just fantastic!

And, YAY! Leggy's home! Though I wouldn't be surprised if the next chapter opens with:

"Guards, throw him in the dungeons!"shouted Thranduil.

Course, you'd put it a hell of a lot more eloquently than that, but you get the basic idea.

Anyway, thanks for the update. Seriously, I was so exhausted before I thought I'd just check e-mail and if any stories had been updated before bed, and there was yours, so of courseead ead it. But, this has just made me so excited again I don't think I'll be able to sleep for ages yet! OH, it's all so wonderful! Thankyou, Thankyou, THANKYOU!

Luv Mawgy

(Yes, very speechless, wasn't I? *g*)
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From ANON - Mawgy on February 01, 2004
Aaaah, Leggy is such a clever elf. Fighting all those Orcs in an impossible situation, yet finding time to steal their weapons, kill them and get all three travellers out of there. All just to get home to Fearfaron. How sweet! And YES! So close to home now, can't wait!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - giggle on January 27, 2004
Part Deux
You can kill ten thousand orcs; unlimited number of elves, men, dwarves, occasionally even a named character but never, never babies or horses. You let the orcs kill the horses. I was so very upset at that. OK the wizard and elf got hurts and scared but not dead like the horses. OK rant over now. I will never get over this though.
Lack of communication on the man and elfs part. Aragorn not liking to be out of control of the situation and Legolas not wanting to waste his energy on explaining. I can see both points of view unfortunately.
At least the orcs who killed the horse died horrible deaths. It was really painful reading the description of Legolas removing the arrow. Ick.
I am glad the king's army showed up as back up. Otherwise no way would they have made it to the river and thfetyfety of the canoe.
Taumting orcs is so effective.
OK another horse dead here. I feel bad again. I know they died bravely saving their masters but, but, but, don't do it again. OK?
I am so glad they got away, it was a close thing. Also that the army finally showed up and is killing all the orcs. I hope none of them get away.
Running the Forest River was exciting. I've run the Rogue River and it is a wild ride but this sounded much wilder.
OK now they are heading for the stronghold, battered, bruised and in serious need of healers. I am so sure the king will welcome them with open arms. HA HA HA
That was exciting. I thought the first part oe che chapter was exciting but part deux was really wild. Can't wait to see what Elrond and Erestor are up to and how the king reacts to his worst nightmare, having to help the Tawarwaith. giggle (in more ways than one)
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From ANON - louise_oblique on January 27, 2004
Brilliant and fantastic, I love LOVE love this fic, hope there all ok, pleae update soon

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louise
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From ANON - js on January 27, 2004
thanks so much for your great, great chapters.
so happy to find him still breathing
"That is well, do my work for me! Come on, maggot fodder, I will use your rotting bodies to feed my trees! This day is the last you will look upon the fairness of my woods, and for the rest of your damned existence may your black spirits roil in the torment of the Void with your faithless master!"
oh, sometimes, i feel pity for these nameless orcs, but at the same time, i really love your legolas.....and aragon, too
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From ANON - giggle on January 27, 2004
Your story wasn't the only thing fighting, but I shouldn't call Legolas and company a thing.
I so like that Legolas is an elf not a human acting elf. He is so unpredictable to both Aragron and Gandalf he he truly is elvish. They can't read him or tell what he is going to do next. Despite being raised around elves and Gandalf having years to get to know elves this wood elf is truly too elf like for them to read.
It was so cool when he caught an arrow in mid flight so he could check it for poison. I also liked the reaction of Aragorn when he just stood and watched as Legolas taunthe ohe orcs to the point that what littlnse nse they had was lost and they just acted. Legolas just wiped the forest floor with the orcs. Aragorn didn't get to even raise his sword to fight. I just loved this scene, the descriptions were superb as always.
Legolas feels vindicated now, he is more than just talk. He can fight and protect the Man and the Wizard. After the last night Legolas was in sad shape again. He feels he always has to prove himself with Gandalf and Aragorn. I was glad when Gandalf and Aragorn welcomed him back so to speak even though they still have a reserve with him because of his elvish qualities and abilities that they find hard to comprehend. The fact that he cut himself to leave a blood trail really bothered them. He does what he has to do rather someone agrees or understands or not. He is Tawarwaith and even elves would find it hard to understand his actions and motivations at times.
I have to mention the horse inteion.ion. That was great up to and including Gandalf not wanting to share the horses real name with Legolas.
The orcs are coming! The orcs are coming! I sure hope some of the aid that Thranduil talked about can find them and help them. I think this going to be more than even Legolas and his company can handle. EEP.
Thank you for the update. I am sure the life of a writer is no bed of roses. giggle

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From ANON - Gabrielle on January 24, 2004
I have spent the last three nights absolutely engrossed in this amazing story! rarely has a writer stirred my imagination to such a degree that I find myself lost in in almost complete visualizaton!! MORE, MORORE.ORE..I awaite the next chapters with baited breath. Thank you writer!!!!!
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 18, 2004
First, thankyou for all your kind words in my story. And, if you realant ant a way to thanks me, then another chapter posted soon would be the best way for you to show your appreciation. *g* Ummm, yes, about that Haldir burial/burn thing, well, it was 10 or 11 months between updates, and I kinda forgot what I had written in the chapter before the last, so Haldir being buried was a mistake on my part, not Legolas'. Woops. I was hoping no one would notice (or at least comment on it). But, I'm planning on going back and re-writing that chapter when I get a chance.

Well, I'm glad my characters have come out so life-like, but I wasn't actually intending for that to happen. To me, my story is just about sex. That's all, really. But, if you can get something out of it, more than what I thought anyone could ever see this story as being, well, then I guess I'm more talented than I give myself credit for. But, thankyou, thankyou THANKYOU!

Anyway, back to you.

Hehe, I liked how Aragorn wanted to turn away from Leggy, yet couldn't bring himself to do it, then rationalised him doing that as being concerned for his patient, rather than curious about another male in that way. Oh, it was just BRILLIANT! Though, I was expecting him to come out of it with a hard-on, but I guess that can wait for Legolas' next 'performance', should there ever be another. Still, I'm sure this one will be enough to fill lon long and lonely nights Aragorn has to endure in the coming years.

And, I thought it was just great how Aragorn's mind automatically jumpedElroElrond when Legolas begged his father. It's just going tp add to the tension something shocking when they all meet up, if they do, that is. (Seriously, the way you ahve this story going, I have no idea what's going to happen just around the corner... in a good way, though. Just means you're keeping me on my toes). Though I thought it a bit rich of him to blame Legolas for taking away everything his father ever told him about love making, seeing as if it weren't for Elrond he 1. would never had been lied to in the first place as there are many who use sex as a negative thing, 2. Leggy would not have been used by Elrond, so the thought of Elrond forcing Legolas to beg him as his son would not have jumped into the man's mind, and 3. may not have met Legolas for some time yet, and would be in a much better condition than the one he is in. Yeah, so, stupid Aragorn. If he's going to get mad at anyone it should be his foster father, which I realise is hard for him do because to him Elrond has only ever been nice, but he should come to understand that everything isn't as rose-tinted as he thinks.

Though, I liked the dream he had with Legolas and Elrond throughout different places in Rivendell. With all that he's seen and heard in the past few days, I wouldn't be too surprised if he thought it was actually a possible outcome for all these goings on. But, somehow, even with Elrond the way he is, I doubt he's even that mean to Leggy. *shrugs* I'll just ahve to wait and read to find out what happens.

Aaaaah, so, we're finally getting to the big orcs battle scene the three must get through before they can return Leggy to Feafaron. YAY! I hope all goes well for the three, and I can't wait to find out how it goes for them. But, I also can't wait to see how Thranduil/Fearfaron and the messenger are going and kin kind of rage Thranduil has/will wormselmself in to. Then again, I'm also quite curious to see how Elrond and Erestor are getting on as well. Anyway, I'm sure you know what you're doing and will bring them back to the story when the time is right. It's just my impatience that wants it *NOW!*

Anyway, until next time, this fic is so amazing and just wondery wry written, thanks for sharing it,

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Wow on January 18, 2004
You are an absolutely amazing writer. I'm blown away by the originality of your work and the beautiful style (even when macabre) of your prose. Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - giggle on January 17, 2004
I got a little worried when I saw the title "Falling Faith". I wondered if Legolas was going to start breaking down even more. Whew. He will fight to the bitter end. He is so very strong.
When I begin a new chapter of yours I am always just swept away by your style. I love words and you really know how to use them to good advantage.
Still in that hot, humid foetid swamp. I hate humidity. It is so hard to breath.
Aragorn's dream was erotic but disturbing. It disturbed Aragorn as well. Having to see his foster father in those situations. But then who put him those situations. Elrond himself so place the blame where it belongs. Then Gandalf chastising Aragorn for not wanting to know and remaining ignorant of certain aspects of his foster father's life. Life is sometimes hard to take when a hero bites the dust. Everyone has their feet of clay in some way or other.
Oh Oh That Talan is much to small for Legolas' goings on. Drugged, dazed, confused and aroused. Not a good combonation at all.ll all as I read that particular scene it got almost as hot and humid in my computer room as it did in the swamp. No one enjoyed that scene(except your loyal readers). Not even Legolas. I feel so bad when he cries. He has no one to just let him be himself except for that carpenter guy whose name starts with F. And Legolas can't stay with him. He has a job to do. I definitely want Malthan in the big smackdown with Thranduil, Elrond and Erestor. Let's not leave anyone out here. Also all the elves who helped carry out the nefarious scheme of Thranduil's to get rid of Legolas.
It is interesting to watch Aragorn try to process what he has just seen and connect it to what he has learned so far. He has been protected by his naivete and by Imladris as a whole. Imladris sounds like the '50's in the USA. Everything was doing things but no one talabouabout it and you were fine until you got caught. Bet he never thought of himself as innocent before. Probably counted himself as being worldly wise in many ways. The scales have fallen from his eyes in a big way now.
Now Aragorn is worried the elf will blame him because of the drug. He doesn't yet know that Legolas always only blames himself.
So everyone wants to just move on to easier topics like Legolas' state of health, moving on from this drear place and killing orcs. Those topics will get you through many a sticky social situation.
Now orcs are trying to be clever. Clever orcs a Middle Earth oxymoron if I ever heard one.
Battle tactics, another good safe topic. Legolas is so pleased the human has learned from the elf some battle tactics for the woods. AH arrows. Those prissy Imladrian elves. Legolas doesn't have the resources or time to make pretty arrows. He just needs them to be good enough to kill things. Get real Aragorn. You've led such a very different life. You've ben loved, protected and cared for. I'm sure you have made arrows but you have been given many. OK he was just concerned about Legolas but he came off as kind of snooty.
The Shadow is affecting their minds and not in a good way. No wonder wood elves are dangerous and wild. They have to deal with Shadow all the time.
Traps require bait. Said so calmly it sent a shiver down my spine the first time I read that. Of course it is foolishly dangerous. This is mostly what Legolas does. He doesn't take the safe path at all to save his beloved Tawar.
Legolas has no knowledge that the king's armies have to give him aid also now. I still love that scene when Thranduil is well and truly had. HA.
Poor elf. He feels unwanted and unappreciated again. No one listens to him or likes him. We like you and we know you are going to go on and be a great warrior one day. Mirkwood will be famous for having given you to Middle Earth as a hero.
I really liked the memory of the sea from Mithrandir's trip over the Sundering Sea. The islands in the Great Sea being like the mountains sticking their peaks out of the sea of green foliage. Wondering what else was now in his memory that had not been there before. Such a great concept.
I always love the connection with Tawar always there to sooth the wood elf. Can't get enough of that wood elf/woods stuff
Like sharks he attrache ohe orcs with elven blood. He's orc bait now.
And now the evil cliffie from the wicked writer we love. Thank you for another great angst filled chapter. giggle

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From ANON - louise_oblique on January 17, 2004
This fic is indeed fabulas, I love it. poor legolas feeling concurrent pain. total nightmare and yes A and G judging him for things not his fault. he has been the victium in his sexual life, (well whole life actually) very unfair. E should feel guilty, tons of it. wondeing if T is his father? could he ever feel remorse for his teatment, i doubt it but would be nice. wondering who is father is as that would get rid of the insest for poor legolas.

take care and exceptionally well done, i still love this fic as much as before and probably more as you really keep my interest. looking forward to the next update

huggs
louise
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 13, 2004
Ok, you know what, you've given up on the chapter nimbers and they no longer match my own anyway, so I'll stop doing it too. That, and this is the last one I have to do so I shall now be up to date with you and now just have to review as I read each chapter. (you have no idea how much of a relief it is to not have these reviews hanging over my head anymore. Not that I haven't liked reviewing and telling you how wonderful your fic is, but it's nice to get up to date and relax for a while... though I hope not too long as I'd like another update as soon as possible, please?)

Personally, being the sadistic brat I am, and like seeing Leggy being hurt and abused (as long as there's a happy ending *hint hint*), this would have to be most likely my favourite chapter so far. (I say 'most likely' as it's SO hard to choose with this fic. I LOVE IT ALL!
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OK, I know I'm jumping to the end here, but, although I feel sorry for Leggy, I think I have more sympathy for Gandalf. I mean, Leggy did just come inside the blt het he and the wizard share. *g* But, apart from that. He's the one that is watching Leggy go through hell and there is very little he is able to do about it. He's practically watching his friend loose his mind and slowly fading away, absorbed in self-guilt and despair. So sad.

I liked at the beginning at how one of the people Leggy has yet to save was there and said that he was notnt tnt to be where he was. Gave me the impression that that was Valtamar in the Halls of Mandos, and he was saying that Leggy did not belong there and only he (Valtamar) belonged there. So, it was his way of telling Legolas that he had been freed, and at that point I was celebrating. Then, when things got worse I kinda realised that perhaps I jumped to conclusions (I have a habit of doing that), and it came to me that things for Leggy has never been so easy, why should now be any different?

Oh, Malthen is such a horrid elf. Even if it was not him, how could his dream self get off on making Leggy beg him, his father to screw him? Actually, I know exactly how he could do it, I just think it's mean. (but very kinky too ;P ).

I liked that Elrond came along and started to have his way with Leggy as well. And, for some reason I kept thinking Thranduil was going to turn up sooner or later as well and half a turn, and, while I was relieved that he didn't, I'm also disappointed.

Now, this is just a random thought that I keep having, but it won't go away, so I keep thinking maybe it's a possiblity (though a highly doubtful one). I don't know why, but although it's been ty mty much established that Malthen is Leggy's father, when Feafaron said that he was not going to reveal leggy's father to Thranduil, I don't know why, but I keep thinking maybe Fearfaron is Leggy's dad. That maybe he and ningloriel had a one nigtandtand and Leggy is the result of that. *shrugs* Just my thinking, and, as I said, a highly doubtful outcome, but, again, being a lover of happy endings, I think that if Feafaron did turn out to be Leggy's dad could contribute a lot to a good ending for all.

But, still, your story, do what you want, and I'll continue reading and reviewing, and no doubt loving everything like I already do. (Yes, even the torturing of Leggy, even though I may appear highly opposed to ittimetimes.

Thanks for a wonderful story thus far, and I can't wait for the next update.

Luv Mawgy, who's FINALLY got up to where you are! YAY! WOOHOO! GO ME! Now I'm going to go and put some ice on my poor fingers. I swear they have never had this much of a workout as what they have reviewing all your chapters. But, at least it's been worth it!
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 13, 2004
Chapter 38

Bastard! Bastard! BASTARD! Ok, in my second review I asked how anyone could do that to their only son. Now, however, How can he WANT that to happen to their only son!? These people really should start looking past the end of their noses and reaise Legolas is innocent in whatever they have comdemned him. Thranduil may have wanted him to die in battle, which, for him is totally in character, but I can't get over that he wanted Leggy to die just to get at Ningloriel! How can they all be so selfish as to use this one being as the source of all their scheming. That goes for Ninglorielrandranduil, Elrond and even Erestor to a point. And I'm sure there are and will be others who are more than willing to use Legolas to their own ends.

Ok, now that I've just stood up for him, being the contrictory person I am, I'm going to start celebrating for Thranduil is about to find out about Leggy and Elrond which means more torture for Leggy, yebiggbigger, juicier plot for all your readers (esp. me)! So, WOOHOO! But, knowing you, you're going to want to draw it out as long as possible and not get back to that particular scenes for a few chapters yet, right? (course, now that I've said that you may surprise me and do it next chapter, which I'd love, but finubtfubtful. Besides, I'm sure you know what you're doing and it'll be wonderful no matter what!)

By the way, as much as I love your writing style, I must admit I was not quite expecting how imaginative and detailed the council chamber was described. It sounded so nice and pretty and the way in which you described it; just made it so easy to visualise, so that was really amazing.Luv Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 13, 2004
Chapter 37

First off, I have juts finished re-reading your wonderulf fic, and earlier I questioned the braid around Leggy's ankle, but you need not worry about answering me as I found the place when Malthen gave it to him when he started on the tasks. SO, it's all good.

OH! YAY! I'm so glad Legolas has finally been allowed to find out the true identites of those elves. Curse them! (By way,way, I know I haven't mentioned this before and it's probably not the best time right now, but I like the insults you come up with and the swearing you create, like 'Eru's arse!' Don't know why, I just think they are quite unique and wonderful Actually, I've kinda stolen that one and have started using it in everyday life. My friends all look at me as if I'm mad, but I don't care, it's better than anything they say).

And I just adored that little moment between Aragorn and Legolas when Aragorn said he and Elrohir made all these plans to kidnap him and brinm hom home. Just imagine how different his life may have turned out if thy had! Course, Elrond would probably just send him home again, but at least he would have remember what Elrond looked like and wouldn't have slept with him and been caused so much heartache. But, still, it must have been wonderful for him to realise that there were people who hadn't even met him that liked and felt sorry for him.

Hehe, I liked that in the aftermath of a battle and another soon to come there was time for some joking around. I LOVED how Gandalf and Aragorn said Leggy smelt! That was funny!

Well, if nothing else then Leggy sure is determined to get home, even if it means almost certain death past (through) hordes of Orcs. Still, I'm sure he'll survive safe and sound on the other side. Anyway, the messenger Elrond sent was able to get to the Palace alright, so i'm sure Leggy and company will too. (then again the messenger may have gone round Mirkwood rather than through, but that's beside the point).

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - spiffy on January 09, 2004
Amazing imagination. Awesome writing. Wow!

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