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By : narcolinde

From ANON - Autore on January 09, 2004
Note to self: do NOT read bloody/incestuous/nightmare scenes while drinking vanilla coke. Does NOT go down well. Now I'm going to be all jaded. All people are selfish, brutal bastards, except for the occassional wizard/ exiled king/ oddball elf. Legolas needs more of them, if he's gonna survive 'til LotR. *Hisses at Thranduil* Looking forward to more... just not with v-coke...
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From ANON - giggle on January 09, 2004
That was some technicolor, psychadelic, mind blowing wet dream. You can really evoke the sounds, smells and visons of Legolas' world. It is lyrical, beautiful and fearsome to read these chapters. I never know where they are going next.
Thanks for tpdatpdate. I love your writing and the story. giggle
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From ANON - louise_oblique on January 08, 2004
OMG shocked, very powerful, well done. sorry short bedtime :)

huggs
louise
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 07, 2004
Chapter 36 (almost don
OH
OH! Wonderful! Not only *another* brilliant chapter, but it was so descriptive I could just see Leggy swinging and dodging and killing... Excellent!

Oh, but I felt so sorry for Leggy when the horses didn't want anything to do with him. Though I bet it gave Gandalf a good shock to see this otherwise placid elf so bloodthristy when he returned.

ARThe The truth will eventually come out! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this! For someone to give Leggy their true identities, I'm just SO glad you've finally decided to for the truth to come out before I grew an ulcer stressing and waiting for it all to come out!

And, I liked the little argument Leggy and Aragorn had. I don't know why. Maybe it's because they had just come out of a battle and need to rest and heal, and get away from the area in case ais sis sis still around, yet they make time to argue. I just think it's quite good. That, and also what they are actually fighting about. Kinda brings it all into perspective for Leggy and how much his home means to him.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 07, 2004
Chapter 35

YAY! Go Gandalf! Just goes to show Homer Simpson is wrong, and that old people are useful.

Ummm, that's it for this chapter, I'm afraid. Although it's a wonderfully written and much needed chapter, it is pretty much just a battle scene and all I can think of to say is "Woohoo! Neither Gandalf or Aragorn died!" Let's just hope the same can be said for leggy. ;)

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - spiffy on January 02, 2004
Wow! I'm continually amazed and delighted by your imagination and by your command of the English language. Your lovely description of the Council Chamber was captivating. I could picture its majesty and longed to see it in reality. I still hope for a happy ending amidst all this wicked plotting but how you'll get there ....? Thank you for your lengthy and intricate story. Please continue and Happy New Year!

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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 34, part 2

What is it with the Male rulers of each Elven Realm? Is it customary for all them to be complete and utter bastards!? How dare Thranduil mock both Lindalcon and his father! Has he no respect for the dead? Good on Lind for giving himood,ood, hard kick and punch! Even if the tables did turn on him soon after, but still, well done for sticking up for both himself and his father.

Still, Lindalcon had the last laugh as Thranduil willingly aded ted to everyine in his court that he would help that which he hoped would. Co. Course, technically, Ningloriel had the last laugh (by the way, GREAT way to end the chapter! I truly LOVE!), !), but that's beside the point. Thranduil got his just desserts, as it should be rightly so. And Leggy shall no longer be alone! Yet, I can't help but wonder if he will accept such help. I realise a part of him will greatly appreciate all that he has been promised, but I think his pride might get in the way somewhat and chose tcompcomplish his task alone, for only thh hih himself and his sacrifices can the other two souls be freed. Just my thoughts, though. Who knows? I could be wrong. *shrugs* I guess I'll find out eventually.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 32, part 2

Oh, poor sweet Leggy. he knows the end is near, but with the hope of his friends and those he loves, that he will last long enough to overcome what ails him.

Hehe, I like the part with the foul tasting medicine, reminds me on when I was a child and disgusting cough medicines and whatever was forced down my throat. ONly, I was never allowed to alter the taste. *pouts* Still, I suppose Leggy does deserve something nice as he has been through a lot recently.

Hmmm, if I were Aragorn or Gandalf, I wouldn't like that look in Leggy's eyes that told them herathrather see them dead than in the hands of the nazgul. For some reason, if worst comes to worst, I can see Leggy killing both his friends, then himself, just so the Ringwraiths get none of them. I don't know if this is what you intended Leggy to come accross as, but it's how I am interpreting it, none the less. I just wish it doesn't come to that.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 33 (hmmm, seems like I may be doing more than just 'one more before I retire')

hehe, I LOVE Leggy and Aragorn's conversation where the man refuses to give up any information about his heritage, yet Leggy is so desperately seeking answers to his questions. It must be so frustrating for our favourite Elf, but it was just hilarious to me! Thanks for that.

Pity the humour was short lived and Leggy was soon struck by another attack. I know I've said this before, but I truly do hope that Leggy makes it back home in time. Though, I'm pretty sure he will for there will be no story without the main character, nor indeed would he be able to go to Mordor in the Fellowship, as you've pointed out already how this story fits in with Tolkien's version of Middle Earth history and stuff.

But, where the hell is Elrond and Erestor? Well, I guess Elrond is still looking after the child, and Erestor has no idea where Leggy has gone and does no wish to leave his lord for long, but that's no excuse. He should at least be trying to do *something.* It is, afterall, practically his fault Leggy is like this, albeit he unkowingly did so.

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapt2 (o2 (ok, one more before I retire for the night)

YAY! Leggy and Aragorn are friends! How nice!

But, as I said, I did not think it was good for Leggy to meet Gandalf so soon after his attack, because, for a while there, he did get worse befoe sle slowly became better. Yet, knowing this is not the end of Legy's anguish, I still don't think it's good for him. But, seeing as yuo are the boss of this story, I'll let you say it however you wish, I'm just along for the ride. And, so far, it's just wonderfully excellent! Thankyou for shring your thoughts with everyone!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Ooops, that last one is chapter 31, not 32. sorry for any confusion
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 32

lastlast one for tonight.

Now, I know this chapter is important, but as with another chapter earlier on, I cannot think of much to comment upon. I'm grateful Gandalf and Aragorn are now there to look after him in his hour of need, but I am not so sure meeting Mithrandir so soon is a good thing for it could only bring Leggy more heartache, and, for a while, that is exactly as it has done. But, still, good thing for a nice, chunky plot, something you can really sink your teeth in to.

Oh, and Leggy's last admition about needing to go home was SO sweet, I only hope he can get there before it is tooo late.

Luv Mawgy.
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 30, part 2

Elrond! You BASTARD! How can you do that to Leggy? He has done nothing but wish for comfort and realease, as he deserves, and no doubt, as you hexpeexperienced your whole life! Let him find some measure of happiness, would you!? (don't you just love how my reviews are turning into verbal insults towards Elrond, rather than appreciative statements towards you and your story, dear Narcolinde. Sorry, but I just can't help myself, as he is rather single-minded and needs to be taught a lesson).

Oh, I trapplapplaud Erestor, not only for taking the greatest of care with Leggy to show the elf true pleasure, but also for willing to come clean about all that he has taken part in. I realise when he found out Leggy wanted Elrond to be his true father, he could not go thourhg with it, but just that he wanted el tel the truth is all that matters. But, did he have to be so truthful about Maltahondo!? Poor, sweet little Legsie... I only hope he can reach Fearfaron before anything too bad happens to him.

Luv Mawgy

P.S. Sorry, this may just be me showing how long it has been since I read the earliest of your chapters, but what does Leggy cutting the braid from around his ankle off mean to symbolise? Was it something Malthen gave him? Or Erestor perhaps?
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 30

"{Legolas. So very like his mother: wildly passionate, beautiful to behold, entirely wanton, and completely selfish. Are all in Ningloriel's line so false of heart?}" I think, Elrond, it's time you had a good look in the mirror and decided who is the selfish one! You REALLY are blind to everyone and everything aside from yourself, aren't you!?

I liked the flashback into the past to see how Ningloriel and Elrond first met, it's a nice touch. Thankyou for sharing that precious moment.

Oh, and I LOVED when Erestor and Leggy woke up and acted as two lvoers should; playful, passionate and completely in tune with one another. That is what Leggy deserves every day of his life. Shame he has only to feel it now, and it's so short lived it is hardly fair for one so sweet to know nothing but heartache for the majority of his life. Still, I am hoping for 1. a happy ending for our dear prince, and 2. to find out who the father truly is!

Luv Mawgy
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From ANON - Mawgy on January 02, 2004
Chapter 29

YAY! Leggygets to finally be the one to enter another! TRust Erestor to be the first one to show him new pleasures.

Hehe, and Erestor finally got what he wanted and came inside Leggy's mouth. How sweet. Pity as tas taken Leggy so long to find out how making love should be.

Luv Mawgy
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